Question

求英语大神帮我修改一下作文

本人刚上大学，高中英语基础很差，想好好学一下。写了一篇作文，希望有人帮我修改一下，写的很烂，如果某个句子能用更好的方式表达请给我说一下。望不要笑，- - As time goes by,I entered the college this year.So far,I complete my wish about going to college.

As for, why I go to college,The following are a few reasons.

First of all,I really wish the interesting experience will belong to me in the future,because it is very important to me. I think myself will become very disappointed if thing that I eager to do ever get a boring and dull thing. Of course,I feel happy now in the college.

What’s more,I want to learn more and more knowledge in college of four years,because rich knowledge can make me get more wealth,because I think college is a stage that improve my ability in many ways.

In the end,college is a springboard in my life,I wish to use it to get a better tomorrow.

Answer 1

要想学好英语，靠的是你自己不懈的努力，靠别人的话，永远不会对你有实质性的帮助；以下是我修改后的文章，供你参考对比，希望你能够凭自己的努力按照你英文中所描述的提高你自己，而不是为了作文而夸夸其谈。

I realized my wish for entering college.

The following reasons are for why I went to colleague.

First of all, I really wish that I can have an interesting
experience in the future as it is very important to me. I think I shall be very
disappointed if things that I am eager to do but if I just get a
boring and dull one in the end. For sure now I feel really happy in the college.

What's more, I want to learn more and more knowledge
in college in the coming four years, because abundant knowledge can make me wealthier, also
because I think college is a stage which will improve my ability in many
different ways.

In the end, college is a springboard for my life, I wish
to get a better tomorrow through it.

Answer 2

As time goes by, I entered the college this year. So far, I complete my wish about going to college.

As to why I go to college, the following are the reasons.

First of all, I really wish the interesting experience will belong to me in the future, because it is very important to me. I think I will become very disappointed if one thing that I eager to do ever get a boring and dull thing. Of course, I feel happy now in the college.

What's more, I want to learn more and more knowledge in college in four years, because rich knowledge can make me get more wealth, and I think college is a stage that can improve my ability in many ways.

In the end, college is a springboard in my life, I wish to use it to get a better tomorrow.