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请找出这段英文的语法错误并改正

"The Happy Prince" writes about the story of the Happy Prince and a swallow. Story goes that the Happy Prince's statue stands right in the middle of the city. His body was made of pure gold and his eyes of sparkling sapphire. On the hilt of his sword also lies a big ruby that shines away brightly. In order to help the poor, he got the swallow to give his pure gold body and precious stones to them. The starving people rejoiced for they received happiness and warmth. The swallow loved the Happy Prince dearly and it didn't fly off as Winter approached. In the end, it was frozen to death. On the other hand, the Happy Prince's statue was removed for it no longer had a gold body and precious stones on it. The people tried to melt the statue but they found that a heart that they couldn't melt. The angels from Heaven descended and took the Happy Prince and the swallow to Heaven.

The first word that I thought of was devotion after I finished the story. Both the Happy Prince and the swallow are so selfless. The Happy Prince, in particular, abandoned all his riches so as to help the poor and hungry while the swallow rather stay during the cold winter to lend him a hand and aid those people. From them, I learn that such a kind of dedication requires selfless love from some one.

Look at the world and we'll realise that there are a lot of people who resemble the Happy Prince and the swallow. They are the people who have been dedicating their lives to a particular cause silently. One example would be our parents. They have been working hard on a daily basis so as to take care of us. They give and have never asked for any returns. To them, our thriving is their greatest wish. Another example would be our beloved teachers. They have worked hard the students, who are like the flowers of our Motherland. There are also some volunteers in our society. Regardless of the weather and adversities, they have never failed to give back to society.

As I continue to read on carefully, I realised that Oscar Wilde not only praised devoted individuals like the Happy Prince and the swallow but also criticised the snobbish characters in his stories. Such snobbish characters include the officials and in particular, Mayor of the town. They are unable to differentiate right from wrong and just obey the orders given by the Mayor. The Happy Prince has given his precious stones to the people to help them and yet his statue is still being torn down at the end of the day. This depressing situation is unfortunately similar to what we have in real-life.

I've also learnt another very important thing. That is having the looks may be important but ultimately, what's inside matters the most. The Happy Prince gave his precious stones to the people. After he did so, his glamourous appearance became a thing of the past but his inner beauty outshone his appearance and thus they couldn't burn his heart at the end of the day.

Answer 1

你自己看吧，翻译：
“快乐王子”写的故事，快乐王子和燕子。故事是这样的，快乐王子的雕像矗立在城市中。他的身体是由纯黄金和他的眼睛闪闪发光的宝石。他的剑柄上还躺着一个大红宝石，照得鲜亮。为了帮助穷人，他得到了燕子给他的纯黄金和宝石他们。饥饿的人们都为他们收到的幸福和温暖。燕子爱快乐王子的代价，它不飞离冬天来临的时候。最终，它被冻死。另一方面，快乐王子的雕像被删除它不再有黄金和宝石在它。人们试图融化的雕像，但他们发现，他们不能融化的心。天使从天降下，快乐王子和燕子天堂。
第一个字，我认为是投入后，我的故事讲完了。快乐王子和燕子都是那么无私的。快乐王子，特别是，放弃了所有的财富，以帮助穷人和饥饿而燕子呆在寒冷的冬天，借给他一手和援助那些人。他们，我知道这样一种奉献无私的爱一个人需要。
看世界，我们会意识到有很多相似的人快乐王子和燕子。他们是谁的人已奉献自己的生活到某个特定的事业默默。一个例子是我们的父母。他们工作很努力，每天的基础上，以照顾我们。他们并没有要求任何回报。对他们来说，我们的繁荣是他们最大的心愿。另一个例子是我们敬爱的老师。他们努力工作的学生，谁是祖国的花朵。也有一些志愿者在我们的社会。不管天气和逆境，他们从来没有回报社会。
当我继续看仔细，我意识到，奥斯卡怀尔德不仅称赞专门喜欢快乐王子和燕子也批评了势利的人物在他的故事。这种势利的字符包括官员和特别，市长的城市。他们不能分辨对错，只是服从命令由市长。快乐王子给了他的宝石的人去帮助他们，但他的雕像仍被拆除，在一天的结束。这种令人沮丧的情况，不幸的是类似于我们在现实。
我还学到了另一个很重要的事。这是有可能是重要的，但最终，里面是什么最重要。快乐王子献出了自己宝贵的石头的人。他这样做，他迷人的外观成为过去的事情，但他的内在美比外表，因此他们不会燃烧，他的心在一天的结束。