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请问一下这个英语作文咋写？

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Answer 1

Tom is a boy of st week,it was his first trip in Shanghai.Although he only traveled Shanghai for one day,but he was very happy at all.First,he played in Changfeng Park.He had photos with dolphins and seals.Then he visited Yu Garden.It is a traditional place.He bought many small articals.After that,he traveled the most highest building—Oriental Pearl Tower.It is also the most highest building in Asia.In the tower,he knew a lot of things of Shanghai.Finally,he looked at the magnificent Huang Pu River.Tom was so excited in Shanghai,he said that he wanted to visit Shanghai again becaust he liked this morden city.
汤姆是一个男孩的第一周，这是他在上海的第一次。虽然他只在上海的一天，但是他很快乐。第一，他在长风公园玩。他与海豚和海豹的照片。然后他参观了豫园，这是一个传统的地方，他买了许多小文章。之后，他前往最高建筑东方明珠电视塔，也是亚洲最高的建筑。在塔上，他知道很多东西上海。最后，他看着壮丽的黄浦江。汤姆在上海，如此兴奋，他说他想去上海又因为他喜欢这个现代化的城市。