Question

请大家帮我看一下我翻译的对不对！！谢谢了！高手来！

具有先进的各类加工设备及完善的检测手段，形成大中型冶金轧钢设备、水泥成套设备、矿山成套设备和齿轮减速机的设计、制造、销售一条龙的综合服务能力。
With advanced processing equipments and perfect test instruments and measures, we have formed one-stop comprehensive service capabilities，which combined design, manufacture and sale as a whole, on large and medium-sized metallurgy rolling equipment, cement equipment, mining equipment and gear speed reducer.

Answer 1

改了一些小东西 读起来顺一些。还有 中文里这种连起来很长的句子一般都不好翻译，但最好不要在英文里也用那么长的句子，会摸不着头脑。专业术语不太懂 就留着你原来的了。

With advanced processing equipments and complete inspection methods, our comprehensive service capabilities combine design, manufacture and sale to produce large and medium-sized metallurgy rolling equipment, cement equipment, mining equipment and gear speed reducer.

Answer 2

翻译是这样的：配备了先进的加工设备和完善的检测仪器和措施,形成了一条龙综合服务能力,并结合设计、制造、销售为一体,在大、中型冶金轧钢设备、水泥设备,矿用设备和齿轮减速机。

Answer 3

没什么大问题。OK了。