Question

跪求英语达人写一篇英语小作文. 关于汶川地震的 高分 好的有追加 60分 题目是: 为纪念汶川地震

跪求英语达人写一篇英语小作文. 关于汶川地震的 高分 好的有追加 60题目是: 为纪念汶川地震三周年.某英文报发起关于灾区新貌的征文活动.以great changes 为题.写一篇短文.要求如下: 1某中学灾后三年的变化. 如教学和活动场所变好以及师生精神面貌的改变等. 2发生变化的原因(可以说下团结) 3你的感想 4词数:120

Answer 1

好久没写，有点生疏，凑合看吧
three years ago，there was an earthquake in wenchuan，there were too many homeless people.many people felt sad。now， we can see it have many great changes 。for example，a middle shcool was built again，there are more students now。three years ago，there were nothing new，even didn't have a good window。but see it now，there are new windows，new tables，new classrooms。why？because there are too many kind people are helping their friends，we believe we are a big family，we can and will beat all problems，we are strong enough and will be stronger！i think help others is also help ourselves，when we can help other people，we will feel happy；when we meet troubles，others will help us too。so we should be a kind and happy man，we should try to help others。

Answer 2

Great Changes
I am deeply impressed by the great changes that have taken place in the school over the past three years.
On May 12, 2008, a severe earthquake destroyed almost everything in the school ,learning badly-damaged buildings . It is now ,however , taking on a new look . Tall buildings have been put up , including classroom and laboratory buildings , and a library . There is also a newly-built standard playground . In the new environment , teachers and students are living happily and working hard . It is really amazing that the once-ruined place has now been turned into a beautiful school , full of life .
Obviously, without the help of the whole society, there would be no new school today. It is love and concern that have brought about the great changes. Many hands make light work. We can work wonders if we unite as a family , caring for each other and helping those in need.Union is strength.

Answer 3

One possible version

Creat Chganges

I am deeply impressed by the great changes that have taken place in the school over the past three years．

On May 12, 2008, a severe carthquake destroyed almost everything in the school, leaving dadly-damaged buildings. It is now however, taking on a new look. Tall buildings have been put up, including cleassroom and laboratory buildings, and a library. These is also a newly-built standard playground. In the new environment, teachers and students are living happily and working hard. It is really amazing that the once-ruined place has now been turned into a beautiful schook, full of life.

Obviously, without the help of the whole society, there would be no new school today. It is love and concem that have brought about the great changes. Many hands make light work. We can work wonders if we unite as a family, caring for each other and helping those in need. Union is strength.

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Answer 4

英语吧