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英语高手来帮帮忙！！！

我是新高一，开学后我们班有个课前英语演讲，我的PPT已经做好了，下面是我自己写的演讲稿，网上翻译的不怎么对，希望英语好的可以帮我看看有没有什么语法错误啊什么的，最好帮我修改下，不胜感激。
Hello，everyone! I am very happy that I can sand here to have a specch. This is the first time that I have a English specch. If my specch isn't good, please forgive me. Today, my topic is my hometown--Jiaxing. Jiaxing is our hometown, we should know more knowledge about it. First, let us see some introduction of Jiaxing. This is the city tree of Jiaxing. And this is the city flower. Jiaxing has many speciality, let's see. These are Jiaxing Wufangzhai zongzi. Jiaxing also has lots of famous people. Let's see. This is Yu Hua. This is Xu Zhimo. This ia Jin Yong. This is Feng Zikai. Jiaxing is a beautiful city, let's have a good look about the beauty of Jiaxing. This is Santa. This is the south lake. Where is this? This is Xiuzhou district of the new government. I'm very proud of my hometown is Jiaxing. And I am proud of that I am a people in Jiaxing. I love you, Jiaxing. I hope after my specch, you will love Jiaxing more. My speech is over, thank you!
我想让英语好的帮我修改下英语演讲稿。

Answer 1

错误太多了，仅看第一行，就有sand，specch两个错。

Answer 2

来一句句的改哈,
power point 不单单包括的是演讲 (speech)的意思 还有 presentation的部分.

Hello, everyone! ( my name is XXX.) I am very happy that I can STAND (sand 是沙子的意思) here to give a speech (拼错了）(你也可以说 I am very glad to present to you my hometown -jiaxing) 。 this is my first time giving a presentation in English. thank you for your understanding (可以概括了 if my specch isn't good, please forgive me.) My topic is about my hometown - jiaxing. 下面就不要一遍遍地重复啦~ 可以省略的就一句带过。 let me introduce you more about jiaxing. (introduce 已经有初步介绍的意思了 first 可以拿掉） This is the city tree of Jiaxing （加上什么树）. And this is the city flower （。。。什么花）. let's take a look at many famous well known people of jiaxing . (人物不要使用speciality; speciality 是用来对物品，菜，小吃等等进行介绍是用的） This is Yu Hua. This is Xu Zhimo. This ia Jin Yong. This is Feng Zikai. Jiaxing is a beautiful city, (语法） ---->（let's take a look at the beauty） of Jiaxing. This is Santa. This is the south lake. Where is this? This is Xiuzhou district‘s (语法) new government. I'm very proud of my hometown, (is 删掉) Jiaxing. also, to be a part of jiaxing. I love you, Jiaxing. I hope after my specch, you will love Jiaxing as well (more 是更加 对不认识jiaxing的人应该使用你也会同我一样喜欢。。。). My speech is done, thank you for your attention！

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