Question

英语作文 求修改,谢谢.

My name is Wang. I` m seventeen years old. I have a aggressive heart. Sweet-tempered is my character. My hobby is widespread. I like listening to music when I feel tired. Music makes me relaxed. My favorite musician is Richard Clayderman. He is a famous pianist. The whisper of autumn which piano music he played is the most I like music. I also like reading books, because reading can increase knowledge.
One of the subject I like best is English. In my view, English is an interesting subject. I think that speak to others in English is a interesting process. But my spoken English is a little weak, I hope teacher Zhang can help me with my spoken English.
The above is my self introduction.

Answer 1

大作拜读，总体不错，略有瑕疵，大写改过，仅供参考：

My name is Wang. I` m seventeen years old. I have a aggressive heart. BEING Sweet-tempered is my character. My hobby is widespread. I like listening to music when I feel tired. Music makes me relaxed. My favorite musician is Richard Clayderman. He is a famous pianist. The whisper of autumn which THE piano music he played is MY FAVOURITE music. I also like reading books, because reading can increase knowledge.
One of the subjectS I like best is English. In my view, English is an interesting subject. I think that speakING to others in English is aN interesting process. But my spoken English is a little weak, I hope teacher Zhang can help me with my spoken English.
The above is my self introduction.

Answer 2

你不赖嘛，只是在表达方式，语句上修改一下

Answer 3

I have an aggressive heart.

Answer 4

可以在多加一些你对英语的想法和趣事