求解,一篇英语短文改错。谢谢。
Asbasketballfan,IlikeYaoMingbest.Heis2.26mtallandweigh134kg.In2002,hewenttotheUSandjo...
As basketball fan,I like Yao Ming best.He is 2.26m tall and weigh 134kg.In2002,he went to the US and joined the Houston Rocket.He trains every day in order to improved his skills.His performance in the NBA has won hearts at home and abroad.He never gives up.He once said,"In the court,what I think was only how to play well,no matter who the opponent is."He is also a man showed love and sense of responsibility for society.He once donated a lot money to a child who had leukemia.His success tells us what we should do everything as possible as they can.I want to try my best to be a successful man like Yao Ming.
各位帮我改改这篇短文改错嘛,实在改不来,有十处错,谢谢了啊。 展开
各位帮我改改这篇短文改错嘛,实在改不来,有十处错,谢谢了啊。 展开
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更正在括号处标明,共十处错误!
As (a) basketball fan, I like Yao Ming best. He is 2.26m tall and (weighs) 134kg. In 2002, he went to the US and joined the Houston Rocket. He trains every day in order to (improve) his skills. His performance in the NBA has won hearts at home and abroad. He never gives up. He once said, "(On) the court, what I think (is) only how to play well, no matter who the opponent is." He is also a man (showing) love and sense of responsibility for society. He once donated a lot (of) money to a child who had leukemia. His success tells us (that) we should do everything as (possibly) as (we) can. I want to try my best to be a successful man like Yao Ming.
As (a) basketball fan, I like Yao Ming best. He is 2.26m tall and (weighs) 134kg. In 2002, he went to the US and joined the Houston Rocket. He trains every day in order to (improve) his skills. His performance in the NBA has won hearts at home and abroad. He never gives up. He once said, "(On) the court, what I think (is) only how to play well, no matter who the opponent is." He is also a man (showing) love and sense of responsibility for society. He once donated a lot (of) money to a child who had leukemia. His success tells us (that) we should do everything as (possibly) as (we) can. I want to try my best to be a successful man like Yao Ming.
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As/\ basketball fan,I like Yao Ming best.He is 2.26m tall and weigh 134kg.In2002,he went to
a weighs
the US and joined the Houston Rocket.He trains every day in order to improved his skills.His
trained improve
performance in the NBA has won hearts at home and abroad.He never gives up.He once
gave
said,"In the court,what I think was only how to play well,no matter who the opponent is."He is
is
also a man showed love and sense of responsibility for society.He once donated a lot money
showing
to a child who had leukemia.His success tells us what we should do everything as possible as
that或删what
they can.I want to try my best to be a successful man like Yao Ming.
we
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the US and joined the Houston Rocket.He trains every day in order to improved his skills.His
trained improve
performance in the NBA has won hearts at home and abroad.He never gives up.He once
gave
said,"In the court,what I think was only how to play well,no matter who the opponent is."He is
is
also a man showed love and sense of responsibility for society.He once donated a lot money
showing
to a child who had leukemia.His success tells us what we should do everything as possible as
that或删what
they can.I want to try my best to be a successful man like Yao Ming.
we
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As a basketball fan,I like Yao Ming best.He is 2.26m tall and 134kg heavy.In2002,he went to the US and joined the Houston Rocket.He trained every day in order to improve his skills.His performance in the NBA had won hearts at home and abroad.He never gave up.He once said,"In the court,what I think was only how to play well,no matter who the opponent is."He is also a man showed love and sense of responsibility for society.He once donated a lot money to a child who had leukemia.His success tells us what we should do everything as possible as they can.I want to try my best to be a successful man like Yao Ming.
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As basketball两词中间加a;weigh加s;trains改trained;improved去掉最后的d;won改got;gives改gave;what I think was only how to play well中,was改is;showed改who had或who showed;what we should do everything as possible as they can中,what改that,they改we。
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