英语短文改错
TherewasatimewhenZhangYiandIgoodfriends,butnowwearelikestranger.Onhisfirstdayinourcla...
There was a time when Zhang Yi and I good friends,but now we are like stranger.On his first day in our class two yeaws ago,he had no one to talk.I was the first one to say hello to her,so we became friend.Zhang Yi did well in math or he was always ready to helping me with it.One day last month,I told him about that I would be away from school for two days to see a friend.But he told my father about it and that made me angrily.Now,I know I was wrong.I decide to say sorry for him,because I don't want to lose so a good friend.
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There was a time when Zhang Yi and I （were) good friends,but now we are like (strangers).On his first day in our class two years ago,he had no one to talk(to).I was the first one to say hello to (him),so we became (friends).Zhang Yi did well in math (and) he was always ready to (help) me with it.One day last month,I told him (去掉about ）that I would be away from school for two days to see a friend.But he told my father about it and that made me （angry).Now,I know I was wrong.I decide to say sorry(to) him,because I don't want to lose (such)a good friend.
There was a time when Zhang Yi and I （were) good friends,but now we are like (strangers).On his first day in our class two years ago,he had no one to talk(to).I was the first one to say hello to (him),so we became (friends).Zhang Yi did well in math (and) he was always ready to (help) me with it.One day last month,I told him (去掉about ）that I would be away from school for two days to see a friend.But he told my father about it and that made me （angry).Now,I know I was wrong.I decide to say sorry(to) him,because I don't want to lose (such)a good friend.
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