Question

求关于暑假得英语作文，70词左右，不是网上的！由于本人成绩不好，最好出现一些错误，但不要太明显！

Answer 1

Summer is very hot in my hometown and i seldon go out at day time. At night i go out with my friends talk about interest things and we do some outdoor activities tougether. In summer holiday, I spend a lot of time play computer game with my friends. We think it is very interest. And we still talk about it. I also read some novels in summer holiday and I think the stories are very interest. I also do some homework in summer holiday.

不知道你对这篇文章满意不，这篇文章故意设置的几个问题是1故意时态错误，用的全是现在时，2 基本上没有衔接，3，用词重复，句式简单，4双谓语结构。我觉得这都是一般人写作文常犯的错误。不知道你的水平是什么，如果你需要更高级点的版本也可以和我说，我再改改。

Answer 2

In this summer, I played vere happy.beacause my summer vacation of this year was very enjoyable。 i went to the countryside to spend my summer holidays。 it is very beautiful there。 there are green plants， clear rivers， lovely animals kind people。 i spent two weeks helping my grandfather do some farm work there。 i wrote down what happened in my diary every day。

　　besides that， i helped the children in the neighbourhood with their lessons。 i helped them read english improve their spoken english。 their parents thanked me for this。

Answer 3

Summer is very hot in my hometown and i seldon go out at day time. At night i go out with my friends talk about interest things and we do some outdoor activities tougether. In summer holiday, I spend a lot of time play computer game with my friends. We think it is very interest. And we still talk about it. I also read some novels in summer holiday and I think the stories are very interest. I also do some homework in summer holiday

Answer 4

你写个汉语版的吧 这个作文真的是不想去组织语言

Answer 5

这个太不好弄了

Answer 6

不知道