Question

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I have a good friend who's name is LiYing.she is our 1_________
monitor and one of the excellent in our class. 2_________
Clever as she is, but she works very hard.We have a 3_________
lot on common and have a lot to talk about .One evening 4_________
she told me that something happened when her parents was 5_________
out.She was doing her homework one Sunday morning 6_________
when she smell something burnt.She stopped to look out 7_________
of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out 8_________
of her neighbor's house. She called 119 immediate.Ten 9_________
minutes later,firemen came and out out fire.Her neighbor 10________
was very thankful for her help. 11________

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Answer 1

1 who's--whose
2 the most excellent
3 把very去掉,因为后面的hard是副词,不是形容词,前面不能用very修饰~
4 on改成in
5 was改为were
6 on one sunday morning
7 smell改为smelt
8 find改为found
9 immediately
10 the fire
11 对的

Answer 2

I have a good friend who's name is LiYing.she is our 1____whose____
monitor and one of the excellent in our class. 2_ the most excellent________
Clever as she is, but she works very hard.We have a 3__but去掉_______
lot on common and have a lot to talk about .One evening 4on-in_________
she told me that something happened when her parents was 5___was-were______
out.She was doing her homework one Sunday morning 6____on one~_____
when she smell something burnt.She stopped to look out 7_______smell-smelt__
of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out 8____find-found_____
of her neighbor's house. She called 119 immediate.Ten 9____immediate+ly_____
minutes later,firemen came and out out fire.Her neighbor 10__out？i do not know______
was very thankful for her help. 11____我认为对____

Answer 3

1.whoes
2.in 前面加students
3.去掉but
4.on改成in
5.was改为were
6.添in one sunday morning
7.smell改成smelt
8.find改为found
9.immediately
10.put out the fire
11.无错

Answer 4

1 who's--whose2 excellent--excellent students3 去掉but 4 on common --in common5 was --were6 正确7 smell--smelt8 find--found9 immediate--immediately10 out out fire--put out the fire11 正确

Answer 5

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