Question

请帮忙修改一下高中英文自我介绍。有语法错误或者语病的帮我指出来。希望多帮我改用一些从句等，谢谢。

Good morning,everybody! It' my great honour to be here to introduce myself . My English nane is Alice. I'm an out-going girl.When l am in my seinor school .The course is under pressure . Ii's a little hard for me.But l believe l can study well.My favorite sport is swimming.It' very helpful to lose weight.When l'm tired,l like to piay the zither,this is a great way to relax .How is your way to relax yourself ? Can you tell me ? I hope that we can be friends. Thank you!

Answer 1

错误1、第一行的倒数第二个，应该是name。
2、When l am in my seinor school .The course is under pressure Ii's a little hard for me.But l believe l can study well.如果你是高中毕业了，应该是过去式，不过要把最后一句去掉。但你应该是刚上高中，所以不要用when，或者前面加个I think。还有，seinor school应该是senior high school
3、第二行最后，a little只能修饰比较级，可以改成harder或者换个词（如very，so）
4、My favorite sport is swimming 这一句中不能用swimming，直接用swim就可以了。
5、It' very helpful to lose weight 少了个s应该是It's
6、.How is your way to relax yourself 这一句中应该改成to relaxing，how应该改成what。

Answer 2

Good morning,everybody! It's my great honour to be here to introduce myself . My English nane is Alice. I'm an out-going girl.When l am in my seinor school .The course is under pressure . It's a little hard for me.But l believe l can study well.My favorite sport is swimming.It's very helpful to lose weight.When l'm tired,l like to play the zither,this is a great way to relax .How is your way to relax yourself ? Can you tell me ? I hope that we can be friends. Thank you!
我只改了几个单词，你有错误，但不多，仔细看我改的文章吧！

Answer 3

it's my.....my English name is....When I was in my seinor school I was under pressure.后面的It's的形式也是，还有play ，时态有些要用过去式

Answer 4

It's my great honour to be here to introduce myself. My English name is Alice. Although it's a little hard for me to study and i believe i can study well.