Question

英语短文改错，一共有十处错误，谁会啊，我只找出几处，帮帮我吧。。。

One afternoon,when I were on my way home,the weather changed suddenly.Dark clouds were gathered. I began to feel worried so I didn't have a raincoat or umbrella withe me. It soon started to rain. Just when I was hurrying home,I heard of someone calling me from behind.I turned to have a look and find that he was Liu Wei, a good neighbour of mine. He offered to share his umbrella to me. We walked all the ways home. Without Liu Wei's help, I would have got wet to the skin. How thankfully I was for his help!

Answer 1

更缓绝正在括号处标明，一共十处错扰凯姿误孙桥。

One afternoon, when I (was) on my way home, the weather changed suddenly. Dark clouds (去掉were) gathered. I began to feel worried (because) I didn't have a raincoat or (加入an) umbrella with me. It soon started to rain. Just when I was hurrying home, I heard (去掉of) someone calling me from behind. I turned to have a look and (found) that (it) was Liu Wei, a good neighbour of mine. He offered to share his umbrella (with) me. We walked all the (way) home. Without Liu Wei's help, I would have got wet to the skin. How (thankful) I was for his help!

Answer 2

were-was, gathered-gathering, so-because, or后前如加an (with打慧模启错码芹了，但应该不是错）when-while,of去掉，find-found, share 后的to-with, ways-way, thankfully-thankful.