Question

英语短文改错，一共十处错误，大家帮帮忙了。。。

One afternoon,when I were on my way home,the weather changed suddenly.Dark clouds were gathered. I began to feel worried so I didn't have a raincoat or umbrella withe me. It soon started to rain. Just when I was hurrying home,I heard of someone calling me from behind.I turned to have a look and find that he was Liu Wei, a good neighbour of mine. He offered to share his umbrella to me. We walked all the ways home. Without Liu Wei's help, I would have got wet to the skin. How thankfully I was for his help!

Answer 1

One afternoon,when I were on my way home,the weather changed suddenly.Dark （cloud） (去掉were）gathered. I began to feel worried (because) I didn't have a raincoat or (an) umbrella (with) me. It soon started to rain. Just when I was hurrying home,I heard （去掉of） someone calling me from behind.I turned to have a look and (found) that he was Liu Wei, a good neighbour of mine. He offered to share his umbrella (with) me. We walked all the (way) home. Without Liu Wei's help, I would have got wet to the skin. How thankfully I was for his help!
只能改出这么多了。。。