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Oneafternoon,whenIwereonmywayhome,theweatherchangedsuddenly.Darkcloudsweregathered.Ib...
One afternoon,when I were on my way home,the weather changed suddenly.Dark clouds were gathered. I began to feel worried so I didn't have a raincoat or umbrella withe me. It soon started to rain. Just when I was hurrying home,I heard of someone calling me from behind.I turned to have a look and find that he was Liu Wei, a good neighbour of mine. He offered to share his umbrella to me. We walked all the ways home. Without Liu Wei's help, I would have got wet to the skin. How thankfully I was for his help!
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One afternoon,when I were(was) on my way home,the weather changed suddenly.Dark clouds were gathered(gathering). I began to feel worried so(because) I didn't have a raincoat or umbrella withe (with)me. It soon started to rain. Just when I was hurrying home,I heard of(去掉of) someone calling me from behind.I turned to have a look and find(found) that he was Liu Wei, a good neighbour of mine(me). He offered to share his umbrella to(with) me. We walked all the ways(way) home. Without Liu Wei's help, I would have got wet to the skin. How thankfully(thankful) I was for his help!
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