Question

短文改错 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2.只允许修改10处

There was a time when Zhang Yi and I was good friends,but now we are like stranger. On his first day in our class two years ago,he had no one to talk.I was the first one to say hello to her,so we became friends.Zhang Yi did well in math or he was alwags ready to helping me with it.One day last month ,I told him about that I would be away from school for two days to see a friend.But he told my father about it and that made me angrily.Now, I know I was wrong.I decide to say sorry for him,because I don not want to lose so a good friend.

Answer 1

更正楼上错误，正确答案如下：

There was a time when Zhang Yi and I （was改成were） good friends, but now we are like （strangers). On his first day in our class two years ago, he had no one to talk (加入to或with). I was the first one to say hello to (her改成him), so we became friends. Zhang Yi did well in math (or改成and) he was always ready to (helping改成help) me with it. One day last month, I told him (去掉about）that I would be away from school for two days to see a friend. But he told my father about it and that made me （angrily改成angry). Now, I know I was wrong. I decide to say sorry (for改成to）him, because I do not want to lose （so改成such）a good friend.

Answer 2

There was a time when Zhang Yi and I was(改为were) good friend (改为friends),but now we are like stranger(改为strangers) .On his first day in our class two years ago, he had no one to talk. I was the first one to say hello to her(改为him), so we became friends. Zhang Yi did well in math or(改为and) he was always ready to helping(改为help) me with it. One day last month , I told him about that I would be away from school for two days to see a friend. But he told my father about it and that made me angrily（改为angry）. Now,I Know I was（改为am） wrong. I decide to say sorry for（for改为to） him , because (because 改为but)I don't want to lose so(改为such) a good friend

追问

because为什么改为BUT

追答

i'm sorry, but...可以理解成一种固定搭配。但我想这里不改也没关系吧、我也做这题。反正10个错误已经到了