Question

来个英语好一点的帮我看下我的语法有错误么？ 我明天要自我介绍 这是我的稿子 我是高一新生，就在这等谢谢

Hello, my dear students! I am very glad to join the class and I am honored to stand here to introduce myself. My first name is Meng Junyu. I am 17 years old. I like surfing the Internet, reading and so on. My favorite subject is English but my spoken English is so poor that I dare not answer questions.My favorite the star is Lee Hom and I think he is a genius.

When I was a child, I dreamed of being a star. But now I know it is not realistic. Now, I want to be an entrepreneur because I think it can help more people and better repay my parents, I hope my dream will come true.

Finally, I hope we can get along happily.Thank you!

Answer 1

my dear students 这太中式了 你就说hello everybody 就可以
还有英文的自我介绍最好不要说自己口语不好 应该尽量说自己的优势
favorite 后面不加the
get along well英语中相处的好一般这么说
如果帮到你 希望加分啊

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My dear students 这个完全是自己的恶搞想法 呵呵 因为大家都说hello everybody 我觉得太没新意了 favorite 后面的the是自己不小心打上去的 get along well貌似后面要加with吧 记得上课老师好像是这么讲的 要是没什么别的差错的话那就谢谢了 马上给分

Answer 2

Great！ Actually I can‘t understand this artice completely. 很不错哦，你可以试下
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