Question

大家帮我看看这作文的语法有什么问题 帮我改出来好不？谢谢各位了，好的话 我会加好多分

My name is **.I'm a girl,15 years old.Born in Beijing.There are so many reasons why I choose to study aboard in New Zealand,the advantages I can take are incredible.
The greatest advantage is the ability to be more proficient in spoken English.And Study abroad can exercise our capacity for independent living.The most important thing is to study abroad students can receive advanced education abroad.
Environment of living and learning is also a big advantage.New Zealand was named "The most suitable country for living" by U.N.Student can study in a safe and comfortable environment effectively.
That's the reason why i wana study aboard in New Zealand.

Answer 1

横好

Answer 2

idon't

Answer 3

｛我的名字是* * *。我是一个女孩，15岁。出生在北京。有很多原因我为什么选择出国留学新西兰的优势，我可以是难以置信的。最大的优点是能够更熟练的英语口语。留学可以锻炼我们的独立生活能力。最重要的是出国留学的学生可以得到国外先进的教育。环境中生活和学习也是一大优势。新西兰被评为“最适合居住的国家”u.n.student能够在一个安全和舒适的环境中有效地。这就是为什么我想留学新西兰。 ｝这是中文翻译，语句有点不通顺，建议改改。

追问

我当然知道不通顺 所以才让各位帮我改的

追答

你想表达的汉语意思是什么？