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You should be polite Recently I was walking in town when I saw a group of school students in uniform. I was shocked to see that the girls' skirts were very short and they were wearing a lot of makeup .The boys looked very untidy. Their shirts were dirty and some of then eren had their shirtfronts open. I noticed too that some of the studdenfs had pierced their ears and noses, which I don't think should be allowed at school. And the other day,I was riding on the subway when Isaw some boys from a local school.I know they were from that school because they were wearing the same uniforms as my children's.Instead of sitting quietly,these boys were making a lot of noise,chewing gum in an ugly manner,and using bad language. All theother passengers were looking at them and wondering why these boys didn;t have any self-respect.They were also giveing at their school a very bad image. I am a mother of two teenagers at that school and I am worried that my childern aiso behave like this but Ido not know about it.Do school students know what is allowed and what is not allowed when they are wearing their school uniforms?I think the school should be stricter with the students.And I think all students should be taught to be polite.

Answer 1

你应该礼貌
最近，我行走在城镇里，看到一群穿校服的学生。我很震惊：看到小女孩的裙子特别短而且涂抹着厚重的化妆品；小男孩们看起来很不整洁，他们的衬衫很脏，有些甚至敞开了胸口。我也注意到，有些学生在耳朵或鼻子上穿了孔，我认为在学校中这是不应该被允许的。而前几天，我坐地铁，看到一些来自当地学校的男学生。我知道他们来自那所学校，因为他们穿着与我孩子一样的校服。这些孩子不是静静地坐着，而是制造出许多噪音，以难看的姿态咀嚼着口香糖，说着难听的语言。所有的乘客将目光投向他们，并感到疑惑，为什么这些孩子一点自尊也没有？他们败坏了学校的形象。我是两个孩子都在学校上学的妈妈，我担心我的孩子的行为也像这一样，但我却不知道。当学生穿上他们学校的校服，他们知道什么是允许的，什么是不允许的吗？我认为学校应该对学生严格要求，应该教育所有的学生懂礼貌。

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Answer 2

你应该有礼貌，最近我在城里散步时，我看见一个穿制服的中学生。我很震惊地看到，女孩的裙子很短，他们穿着化妆很多男孩看起来非常不整洁。他们的衬衣脏了，然后那一些有shirtfronts开放。我注意到，部分学生已有穿自己的耳朵，鼻子，我认为不应该允许在学校。又有一天，我坐上地铁的时候我看到当地学校的一些男孩。我知道他们，因为他们都穿着同样的制服为我的孩子们s.instead静静坐着，这些孩子正在制造噪音，口香糖在一个丑陋的方式，使用脏话。所有其他乘客都看着他们，想知道为什么这些男孩没有；没有任何self-respect.they也给在学校的一个非常坏的形象。我是一个母亲的青少年在学校和我担心我的孩子也像这样，但我不知道它。学生知道什么是允许的，什么是不允许当他们穿着校服吗？我认为学校应该严格要求学生。我认为所有的学生应该学会有礼貌。

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