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英语短文改错

Dear Mr. and Mrs. White，
I’m writing to you from my home in China . I re-turned back home safe and sound .When I think of the wonderfully two weeks I spend in Australia,I just can't help thinking of you.
You has provided every-thing to make my staying here such a happy and lucky ex perience.I've learned so many,not only English and also culture.Thank you very much.I'll always remem-ber the fun and laughter we shared each other as well as your kind,I'll get in touch with you and write to you often.Please take care!
Yours,
Li Ming

Answer 1

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Dear Mr. and Mrs. White,
I'm writing to you from my home in China. I returned （去掉back）home safe and sound. When I think of the（wonderful）two weeks I (加入have) spent in Australia, I just can't help thinking of you. You（have）provided everything to make my staying there such（加入a）happy and lucky experience. I've learned so (much), not only English (but) also culture. Thank you very much. I'll always remember the fun and laughter we shared (加入with) each other as well as your kindness. I'll (keep/be) in touch with you and (write) to you often. Please take care!
Yours,
Li Ming

Answer 2

1.I re-turned back home safe and sound .
safe改为safely
2.When I think of the wonderfully two weeks I spend in Australia
wonderfully改为wonderful
3.You has provided every-thing to make my staying here such a happy and lucky ex perience.
my staying改为me stay
4..I've learned so many,not only English and also culture.
many改为much，and改为also

Answer 3

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