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BalzacwasagreatFrancewriter,buthewasverypoorbeforehebecamefamous.Helivedinadirtywetro... Balzac was a great France writer,but he was verypoor before he became famous.He lived in a dirty wetroom and worried about food.His friends were so poor as he.One night,the wind was blowing hard and was snowingheavily.Balzac went to bed early but couldn't fall sleep.Hedidn't have something for supper.He thought hard but didn'thave an idea.At the midnight he saw a man get in througha broken window.The man began to search for the bookshlfe.Balzac got up,lit a lamp,and saying,"Don't waste time! I couldn'tfind any money in the daytime.How could you find some in the desk?" 展开
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Balzac(is) a great France writer, but he was very poor before he became famous. He lived in a dirty wetroom and (加入was) worried about food. His friends were (as) poor as he. One night, the wind was blowing hard and (加入it) was snowing heavily. Balzac went to bed early but couldn't fall (asleep). He didn't have (anything) for supper. He thought hard but didn't have an idea. At (去掉the) midnight he saw a man get in through a broken window. The man began to search (去掉for) the bookshelf. Balzac got up, lit a lamp, and (said), "Don't waste time! I couldn't find any money in the daytime. How could you find some in the (dark)?"
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Balzac was a great French writer,but he was very poor before he became famous.He lived in a dirty wetroom andwas worried about his food.His friends were as poor as he.One night,the wind was blowing hard and it was snowing heavily.Balzac went to bed early but couldn't fall asleep.He didn't have anything for supper.He thought hard but didn't have an idea.At the midnight he saw a man get in through a broken window.The man began to search for something. Balzac got up,lit a lamp,and saying,"Don't waste time! I couldn'tfind any money in the daytime.How could you find some in the night(time)?"
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