短文改错，下面短文中有十处语言错误there was a time when zhang yi and i was good friends,
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there was a time when zhang yi and i was good friends,but now we are like stranger.on his fiest day in our class two years ago,he had no one to take.i was the first one to say hello to her,so we became feiends.zhang yi did well in math or he was always ready to helping me with it.one day last month,i told him ahout that i would be away from school for two days to see a friends.but he told my father about it and that made me angrily.now,i know i was wrong.i decide to say sorry for him,because i do not want to lose so a good friends 展开
there was a time when zhang yi and i was good friends,but now we are like stranger.on his fiest day in our class two years ago,he had no one to take.i was the first one to say hello to her,so we became feiends.zhang yi did well in math or he was always ready to helping me with it.one day last month,i told him ahout that i would be away from school for two days to see a friends.but he told my father about it and that made me angrily.now,i know i was wrong.i decide to say sorry for him,because i do not want to lose so a good friends 展开
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there was a time when zhang yi and i (were) good friends, but now we are like (strangers). on his first day in our class two years ago, he had no one to take (加入to/with). i was the first one to say hello to (him), so we became feiends. zhang yi did well in math (and) he was always ready to (help) me with it. one day last month, i told him (去掉ahout) that i would be away from school for two days to see a friends. but he told my father about it and that made me (angry). now, i know i was wrong. i decide to say sorry (to) him, because i do not want to lose (such) a good friend.
注：最后一个单词friends应该是楼主打错了。
there was a time when zhang yi and i (were) good friends, but now we are like (strangers). on his first day in our class two years ago, he had no one to take (加入to/with). i was the first one to say hello to (him), so we became feiends. zhang yi did well in math (and) he was always ready to (help) me with it. one day last month, i told him (去掉ahout) that i would be away from school for two days to see a friends. but he told my father about it and that made me (angry). now, i know i was wrong. i decide to say sorry (to) him, because i do not want to lose (such) a good friend.
注：最后一个单词friends应该是楼主打错了。
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1 was----were 2 friend---friends 3 stranger---strangers 4 One----On
5 to talk---- to talk to 6 her,---him 7 or---and 8 helping---help 9 about/ 9 10 angrily---angry 11 for ----to 12 so---such 13frieng---friend
5 to talk---- to talk to 6 her,---him 7 or---and 8 helping---help 9 about/ 9 10 angrily---angry 11 for ----to 12 so---such 13frieng---friend
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there was a time when zhang yi and i (were) good friends, but now we are like (strangers). on his first day in our class two years ago, he had no one to take (加入to/with). i was the first one to say hello to (him), so we became feiends. zhang yi did well in math (and) he was always ready to me (for) it. one day last month, i told him (去掉ahout) that i would be away from school for two days to see a friends(去掉s). but he told my father about it and that made me (angry). now, i know i was wrong. i decide to say sorry (to) him, because i do not want to lose (such) a good friends (去掉s)
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