Question

英语改错题：

Dear David,
I was writing to you from my hometown in China.I returned
back home safely.While thinking of the wonderful day which I
spent in London,I just can't help think of you.It was so kind of
you to have done everything to make my three-day stay such a
good experience.I've learned so many, not English but also
the culture.What's the more,I can do something myself, which
makes my parents surprising.I really enjoyed a lot ,the fun and
laughter we shared each other.Thank you very much,I'll always
remember this trip except your kindness.Welcome to China in
winter holidays.I'll show them the places of interest in Beijing.

每行最多有一个错误，最多有一个题没有错误。

Answer 1

1第一行 returned 改为 came或 went（returned不可和back连用）
2第二行 day 改为days （那些日子，是复数)
3第三行 think 加ing (can't help +doing)
4第四行 应该是对的，每篇改错都有一个正确，原文中是It was so kind of you to do… 而 to have done 是不定式的完成时，也可以
5第五行 many改为much
6第六行 把What's the more的the 删掉
7第七行 surprising改为surprised
8第八行 we shared each other 中shared 后加with
9第九行 except 改为besides
10最后一行 them 改为you

Answer 2

1.was--am 2. 去掉back 3.think --thinking 4.so--very 5.many--much 6.not--not only 7.去掉 the 8.surprising--surprised 9.except ---besides 10.them--you