Question

英语短文改错 学的好的达人 帮帮忙啊 一共10处 请一一指出啊 先谢谢了啊

I was particular interested in Chares Lamb is Tales from shakespeare ,so it often occur that
I had read a lesson before the teacher taught it.It followed that each time the teacher makes
aquz, I was always able to be among best studebts and get th praise of our teacher. I don't
remember him by name now , and she was then on her thirties ,not tall.she was very good natured
and eveb shy before a group of naught kids like us, but she is very strict in her class, a mistake
whatlater proved very useful in my english study

Answer 1

错误主要是时态，比如第一句前半段是过去式，后半句是现在时。想清楚自己要用哪种时态。第二，称谓不一致。比如第一次提到老师时说I don't remember him ，但是后面是she，这里应该是错误。然后一些句子中出现了两个动词，比如第一句，既有was，又有is，怀疑后一句应该是定语从句，be动词前应该有引导词which或者that