高中英语短文改错《在线等》
有十个Althoughihavemetalotofteachersinmylife,butDevonistheoneiwouldneverforget.Shecamefr...
有十个 Although i have met a lot of teachers in my life ,but Devon is the one i would never forget .She came from Australia .She taught our English when i became a high school student two years ago .Devon always made good preparations for the lessons .She tried her best make her class lively .I used to be poor in English ,especial in written English .But now I`m able to write letters and reports in good English .I still forget how she helped me in my English patiently .Teachers` Day are coming .I`m going to send her card and give her my best wishes .
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Although I have met a lot of teachers in my life, (去掉but) Devon is the one I (will) never forget. She came from Australia. She taught (us/me) English when I became a high school student two years ago. Devon always made good preparations for the lessons. She tried her best (加入to) make her (classes) lively. I used to be poor in English, (especially) in written English. But now I`m able to write letters and reports in good English. I still (remember) how she helped me (with) my English patiently. Teachers` Day (is) coming. I`m going to send her (加入a) card and give her my best wishes .
Although I have met a lot of teachers in my life, (去掉but) Devon is the one I (will) never forget. She came from Australia. She taught (us/me) English when I became a high school student two years ago. Devon always made good preparations for the lessons. She tried her best (加入to) make her (classes) lively. I used to be poor in English, (especially) in written English. But now I`m able to write letters and reports in good English. I still (remember) how she helped me (with) my English patiently. Teachers` Day (is) coming. I`m going to send her (加入a) card and give her my best wishes .
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1.but去掉 2.one前加only 3.our --us 4.came --comes 5.make 前加to 6especial--especially 7.forget --remember 8. in--with 9.are --is 10.card 前加a
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Although i have met a lot of teachers in my life , Devon is the one i will never forget .She comes from Australia .She taught us English when i became a high school student two years ago .Devon always made good preparations for the lessons .She tried her best to make her class lively .I used to be poor in English ,especially in written English .But now I`m able to write letters and reports in good English .I still remember that she helped me with my English patiently .Teachers` Day is coming .I`m going to send her a card and give her my best wishes
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