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短文改错Dear Editor,I'm a senior high school student.I think my parents should buy me computer now.

As we all know,We are now live in the information age and computers have used widely in our day life.Besides,computers are also helpful in our english learning.There are pile of learning softwares we can use help with our studies.Also,I don't think it is wrong for us to spend some time play games. After all,we need anything to relax. What's more, with the computers we can get more informations and knowledge.Don't you agree?

Answer 1

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Dear Editor, I'm a senior high school student. I think my parents should buy me (加入a) computer now. As we all know, We are now (living) in the information age and computers have (加入been) used widely in our day life. Besides, computers are also helpful in our English learning. There are (piles) of learning softwares we can use (加入to) help with our studies. Also, I don't think it is wrong (of) us to spend some time (playing) games. After all, we need (something) to relax. What's more, with (去掉the) computers we can get more (information) and knowledge. Don't you agree?

Answer 2

Dear Editor,I'm a senior high school student. I think my parents should buy me a (加冠词a) computer now. As we all know,We are now living (时态) in the information age and computers have been (被动语态) used widely in our day life. Besides,computers are also helpful in our English learning.There are piles (复数) of learning softwares we can use to (不定式表目的) help with our studies. Also,I don't think it is wrong for us to spend some time playing (词语depend用法) games. After all,we need something to relax. What's more, with (去掉定冠词the) computers we can get more information (单数) and knowledge. Don't you agree?

Answer 3

Dear Editor, I'm a senior high school ("s)student. I think my parents should buy me (a) computer now. As we all know, We are now (living) in the information age and computers have (been) used widely in our day life(s). Besides, computers are also helpful in our English learning. There are (piles) of learning softwares we can use (to) help with our studies. Also, I don't think it is wrong (for) us to spend some time (playing) games. After all, we need (something) to relax. What's more, with (去掉the) computers we can get more (information) and knowledge. Don't you agree?