Question

帮我检查一下英语作文有没错误

Some people think success depends on luck while others think success mainly depends on working hard。They think it has nothing to do with luck.I think success depends on many factors,like will,working hard ,investment and perseverance.Because of these factors,many great man became successful.As the saying gose,success is ninety-nine percent perspiration and one percent luck.

,单词拼写 ，时态语态，语法，词性等。谢谢

Answer 1

个人感觉没啥问题 至少语法上没啥问题 但是man的复数该为men 最后一句个人认为有点问题。
前面说 As the saying gose,success is.........后面加了 perspiration and ........ 个人认为and 不妥 可以改为 plus

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谢谢

Answer 2

很好，没错，放心交。

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investment 能不能解释是投入精力的？

Answer 3

many great men