Yesterday I had visited the kings. It was my first visit to a Australian family.They live in a
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1.Yesterday I had visited the Kings——去掉had
2.a Australian family ——a改an
3.It was kindly of them ——kindly改kind
4. or drive me ——or改and
5.The Kings did his best to make me feel—— his改their
6. We have a good time talking and laughing together laughing ——have改had,laugh感觉不是很好
7. They was eager ——was改were
8.something China ——加about
9.lots of question——复数
2.a Australian family ——a改an
3.It was kindly of them ——kindly改kind
4. or drive me ——or改and
5.The Kings did his best to make me feel—— his改their
6. We have a good time talking and laughing together laughing ——have改had,laugh感觉不是很好
7. They was eager ——was改were
8.something China ——加about
9.lots of question——复数
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Yesterday I had visited the Kings. It was
my first visit to a Australian family . They live in 【去掉had】
a small town .It was kindly of them to meet 【kindly改为kind】
me at the railway station or drive me to their 【or改为and】
home .The Kings did his best to make me feel 【his改为their】
at home .They offered me coffee and other
drinks .We have a good time talking and laughing together. 【have改为had】
They was eager to know something 【was改为were】
China and asked me lots of question. In fact,they are planning to visit China next year.【China前加about;question改为questions】
my first visit to a Australian family . They live in 【去掉had】
a small town .It was kindly of them to meet 【kindly改为kind】
me at the railway station or drive me to their 【or改为and】
home .The Kings did his best to make me feel 【his改为their】
at home .They offered me coffee and other
drinks .We have a good time talking and laughing together. 【have改为had】
They was eager to know something 【was改为were】
China and asked me lots of question. In fact,they are planning to visit China next year.【China前加about;question改为questions】
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a Australian
should be
an Anustralian
should be
an Anustralian
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去掉had
a 变成an
live变成lived
a 变成an
live变成lived
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yesterday应该用过去时,I visited...
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Yesterday i visited the kings.
It was my first visit to an Australian family.
It was my first visit to an Australian family.
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不知道原文,不好意思……
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