Question

英语短文改错 一共十处错误 大小写 标点 拼写 顺序 这几项错误不用改

It was 9：20 that I got to the English Corner.Some were reading some papers and some talking while others were listening attentively.So I joined them in their talk.At the first,I was afraid that my English was so good that I couldn't follow them or make myself understood.I was also afraid someone might laugh at me.But a smiled face here and an encouraging nod there soon put me at ease.I became bolder and came to speak English with them free.We talked about the situation at home and broad,about our school life,our hobbies and our ideas.We changed experiences in our studies with one another and share views,all in English.I learned a lot and made a lot of friends.

Answer 1

It was 9：20 that I got to the English Corner. Some were reading some1.______
papers， and some were talking while others were listening attentively. Someone2.______
was eager to learn from others. So I joined them in their talk. At the first，3.______
I was afraid that my English was so good that I couldn’t follow them4.______
or make myself understood. I was also afraid someone might laugh me.5.______
But a smiled face here and an encouraging nod there soon put me at ease.6.______
I became bolder and came to speak English with them free. We talked7.______
about the situation at home and abroad， about our school life， our hobbies8.______
and our ideas. We exchanged experiences in our studies with one another and9.______
share views， all in English. I learned a lot and made a lot of friends.10.______
[答案]1．that→when。考查时间状语从句。分析句子结构可知，本句中it是指时间，后面应该是when引导的时间状语从句，而不是强调句型。
2．Someone→Everyone。考查不定代词的辨析。由语境可知，英语角的学习者都很认真地练习英语口语，因此代词应用everyone“每人，所有人”。
3．去掉the。冠词冗余。at first是个固定搭配，意思是“最初，首先”。
4．good→poor。考查行文逻辑。根据语境，此处应表示“英语水平不好”之意。在表示“(英语水平)不高时”，应用poor。
5．laugh后加at。表示“嘲笑”应用词组“laugh at”。其后有宾语，介词不能省略。
6．smiled→smiling。考查动词－ed形式和动词－ing形式的区别。此处表示“正在微笑着的”脸，所以应用动词－ing形式。
7．free→freely。考查同根副词的区别。句意：我变得勇敢了，开始与他们自由地用英语交流了。free作副词讲时，意为“免费的，脱离束缚的”；而freely意为“自由地，无阻碍地”，故用freely。
8．√
9．expereinces→experience。名词误用。分析句意可知，此处指我们相互交换学习“经验”。作“经验”讲时experience是不可数名词，没有复数形式。
10．share→shared。考查动词时态。and前后为并列结构，前后两个并列谓语的时态应保持一致。

Answer 2

It was 9：20 that（when） I got to the English Corner.Some were reading some papers and some (加were) talking while others were listening attentively.So I joined them in their talk.At the（the去掉） first,I was afraid that my English was so good（poor/bad） that I couldn't follow them or(and) make myself understood.I was also afraid someone might laugh at me.But a smiled(smiling) face here and an encouraging nod there soon put me at ease.I became bolder and came to speak English with them free(freely).We talked about the situation at home and broad(abroad),about our school life,our hobbies and our ideas.We changed (exchanged )experiences in our studies with one another and share(shared) views,all in English.I learned a lot and made a lot of friends.

追问

连词or改成and有什么语法上的解释么？求教
这里bold用比较级是否合适

追答

我觉得我的是有问题，楼上的说的在理。

Answer 3

It was (加at) 9：20 that I got to the English Corner. Some were reading some papers and some (加were) talking while others were listening attentively.So I joined them in their talk. At (去掉the )first,I was afraid that my English was so (变成poor) that I couldn't follow them or make myself understood. I was also afraid someone might laugh at me. But a (变成smiling) face here and an encouraging nod there soon put me at ease. I became bolder and came to speak English with them(变成 freely.) We talked about the situation at home and (变成abroad),about our school life,our hobbies and our ideas.We(变成 exchanged) (变成experience) (变成about) our studies with one another and (变成shared our)views,all in English 。 .I learned a lot and made a lot of friends.

Answer 4

It was 9：20 that[when] I got to the English Corner.Some [students]were reading some papers and some [are]talking while others were listening attentively.So I joined them in their talk.At the first,I was afraid that my English was so good(poor) that I couldn't follow them or make myself understood.I was also afraid someone might[may] laugh at me.But a smiled[smiling] face here and an encouraging nod there soon put me at ease[easy].I became bolder and came to speak English with them [by]free.We talked about the situation at home and broad[abroad],about our school life,our hobbies and our ideas.We changed experiences in our studies with one another and share views,all in English.I learned a lot and made a lot of friends.
好像不到十处，将就着看吧
做完好几个任务头疼、、
能用就拿走吧

Answer 5

It was 【at】9：20 that I got to the English Corner.Some were reading some papers and some 【were】talking while others were listening attentively.So I joined them in their talk.At the【去掉the】 first,I was afraid that my English was so good【poor】 that I couldn't follow them or make【made】 myself understood.I was also afraid someone might laugh at me.But a smiled【smiling】 face here and an encouraging nod there soon put me at ease.I became bolder and came to speak English with them free【freely】.We talked about the situation at home and broad【abroad】,about our school life,our hobbies and our ideas.We changed 【exchanged】experiences in our studies with one another and share【shared】 views,all in English.I learned a lot and made a lot of friends.

追问

change 为什么要改成exchange呢？ 还有experience在表示经验时是否不可数？

追答

交流，学习的经历
We'll hold a meeting to exchange experiences.
我们将开个会来交流经验。《新汉英词典》
I hope we all can exchange experiences and new ideas with each other. ;
我希望我们大家彼此 交流各自的经验 和新的观念。
I bought their house some of us would like to exchange experiences and share them.
我把自己买房子的一些经验与想大家交流、共享一下。
以上来自有道词典
改正一下：make不用改，是和follow并列的
应该把bolder改为bold(因为他原来并不bold，所以没有比较）