Question

高中英语 改错 请英语高手看看呢。原文如下

I often read English aloud and trying to learn something important in heart. It helps me remember what Ihave learned and form good habit of thinking in English. I listen a lot and communicate with the others in English every day and my written English is becoming better and better . I also try my best master the necessery grammer knowledge . By this means ,I can express me correctly . That's why I have been learning English.
四楼的怎么不改完啊？我看好你哦

Answer 1

第一句 i often read English aloud and "try "to learn something important in heart.
如果用trying 可以把句子改为 i often read English trying to learn something.......去掉and
第二句 It helps me remember what I have learned and "forms"good habit.....
主谓一致
第三句 the others 换成others 没有特指
第四句 I also try my best master,......这里master前面少了to
第五句 Ican express me correctly 把me 去掉 直接说 i can express correctly 加了me就成了中国式英语了
最后一句 that's way I have been learning English 把learning换成studying因为learn表示已经学会某物 没有持续性 因为表示学会了 就是瞬间那一刹那间的动作 就好比die 不可以说have been dead 因为死了就是死了 一瞬间的动作 不可能持续 所以 这里如果要用持续性的 就用study

Answer 2

I often read English aloud and trying【try】to learn something important in【by】 heart. It helps me remember what I have learned and form 【加上the】 good habit of thinking in English. I listen a lot and communicate with the【去掉the】 others in English every day and my written【spoken】 English is becoming better and better . I also try my best 【加上to】master the necessery grammer knowledge . By this means ,I can express me【myself】 correctly . That's why【how】 I have been learning English.
我找不出第九和第十个错。

Answer 3

1.trying---try
2.form good --forms a good
3.the others-- others
4.my best master --.my best to master
5. me --myself

Answer 4

loudly
try
habits
去掉the
everyday后的and改为，
to master
meaning
myself
把what改how

Answer 5

trying--try
第二句helps me to remember……

Answer 6

others 前面不带the,best 后要带to表目的。