Question

高分悬赏中译英

翻译内容如下：
您好：
我这边准备付款订货了，付款后您能马上给我发货吗？
我对订购的商品进行了修改。您收到款后需要您给我确认一下，然后我给您我的收货地址。非常感谢您的帮忙。
能否不要用翻译器~~我是发给客户的 所以要求准确性

Answer 1

Hello:
I am ready for payment to confirm the purchase order. payment immediately after you ship it to me?
I ordered products has been modified. After you receive the money I need you to confirm, then I give you my shipping address. Thank you for your help

Answer 2

Hello, I have payment ready for the order. Can you send out the shipment on your receipt of my payment?
I have made some changes of the order. When you receive my payment, please confirm the order. Then, I will send you my delivery address.
Thanks a lot for your help.

Answer 3

老兄。第一个人已经翻译的很好了！ After you receive the money这句就是“你收到我的付款后”， I need you to confirm就是“我需要你去确认下”.............你还想别人怎么翻译啊？

追问

第一个是翻译器翻译的好吗？我用翻译器就不来这里问了~老兄

追答

额，正好刚才说了那句没什么语法错误，第一句都有问题。我帮你翻下吧。对不起啊，刚只是瞟了一眼。
I am ready for payment to confirm the order.Can you make immediate shipment
to us after our payment?The order of the products has been modified. Please confirm it when
you receive the money , then I give you my shipping address. Thank you for your help.
这样就没什么语法错误了。对不起了。楼下的那位才是强力党。

Answer 4

Greetings!
I am ready to pay for the order. Before I pay, please let me know how soon you would ship the item after payment.
I have some correction to make for the order. After you confirm payment received, please send me a confirmation message. I will provide my shipping address.
Your kind cooperation is highly appreciated.

Answer 5

Hello:

My side prepare payment the order, payment can you'll I delivery?

I order the goods to change. You have the money to you to give me confirm, and then I give you my shipping address. Thank you very much for your help.