Question

高分悬赏中译英

翻译内容如下：
您好：
我这边准备付款订货了，付款后您能马上给我发货吗？
我对订购的商品进行了修改。您收到款后需要您给我确认一下，然后我给您我的收货地址。非常感谢您的帮忙。
能否不要用翻译器~~我是发给客户的 所以要求准确性

Answer 1

Dear xxx:

I am ready for payment to confirm the purchase order.Could you pls deliver the goods immdiately once I make the transfer.I have revised the content of the commodities.Once you have received the payment,pls confirm to me and then I could give you consignee's address.Highly appreciate your kind help!

Answer 2

hello:
I am ready to order goods.Can you mail the goods promptly after my payment?
I alter the goods that I ordered.Please confirm my payment as you receive it.And then I will give my address .Thanks for your fevor.

他们都是用翻译工具翻译的，我是纯手工，绝对没有错

Answer 3

(绝对本人亲自翻译,顺便说一句，有位说他的是正宗外贸函电的那位，语法错的离谱,太搞笑了）
Dear sirs,
We are about to place an order and ready for payment, so will you deliver the goods as soon as we pay?
We have modified the detail about the goods we ordered. Please send us a letter of confirmation after you have received our payment, thereafter we will reply you with our address.
Thank you for your coorperation.

Sincerely.
(签名）
We are looking forward to you early reply.

Answer 4

Hello:
I am here to prepare a payment order, payment immediately after you ship it to me?
I ordered products has been modified. After you receive the money I need you to confirm, then I give you my shipping address. Thank you for your help. 我妈是大学英语老师,不会错的,给分那

Answer 5

dear seller :
I have had the reservation payment ready, could you mail it to me immediately ?
I have had the products modified. please help me ensure it after you receive the money , then I will give you my address. Thanks for your help.

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