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每天早上起来，我们都会刷牙洗脸，偶尔洗头，这些都与水有关。虽然这些都是每天早上必做的，但是从环境上看会对淡水资源有所损失，对环境的压力加剧，而这些却是没有办法改变的。等这些工作做完后，就是吃早饭了，每天早上都会用天然气做饭，虽说吃饭很重要，但是这些也给环境带来了很多的压力，例如会减少国家的不可再生的资源，还有会释放一些二氧化碳，加剧世界的温室效应··有时早上的时候还会看会电视，而这个，不管对火力发电还是水力发电都是一种资源的浪费。

Every morning, we will teeth and wash face, occasionally shampoo, these are related with water. Although these are every morning will do, but will look from the environment of freshwater resources lost something, the pressure on the environment, and that is by no way to change. As the work done, is to eat breakfast every morning, using natural gas cooking, although eating is important, but also to the environment brought a lot of pressure, for example will reduce non-renewable resources of the country, and will release some carbon dioxide, adding to the world of the greenhouse effect.. Sometimes the morning will also see TV, and this, no matter to coal-fired power or hydroelectric power is a waste of resources.

这些虽然影响很小，但是中国每人都这样，那么这将会是一个巨大的影响，所以要尽可能的节约国家资源。

Although these influence is small, but China will each such, so this will be a huge impact, so to save as much as possible of national resources.

Answer 1

原文语法上有问题，修改如下：
Every morning, we need to teeth, wash face, and sometimes shampoo, which is related with water. Although we must do these every morning, in terms of environment, the fresh water resource will be hurt because of these actions, and the environment will face more pressure. But there is no way to change. After these actions, we need to eat. Although eating is important to us, using natural gas to cook brings much stress on environment, for instance, it will reduce non-renewable resources of the country, and will release some carbon dioxide, which will add to the greenhouse effect.. Sometimes we will watch TV in the morning, and this is a waste of resource, no matter coal-fired power or hydroelectric power.

Although the infulence of these actions is small, but if each of the Chinese does the same, it will be great. So we must do our best to save the national resource.

Answer 2

这些虽然影响很小，但是中国每人都这样，那么这将会是一个巨大的影响，所以要尽可能的节约国家资源。
Although these effects are small, but each chinese do it every day,It will be a huge influence,so we should save the national resources as far as possible .

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前面的没问题？

Answer 3

Every morning, we will brush our teeth and wash our faces, and sometimes we will wash our heads. These are all related to water. Although these are must-dos in the mornings, they use the freshwater resources in the environment. This creates pressures on the environment, and there is no way to change it. When these works are done, it is breakfast time. We use natural gas to cook. Although eating is important, it also brought a lot of pressure to the environment. For example, it will reduce non-renewable resources of the country, and it will release carbon dioxide, adding greenhouse effect to the world. Sometimes we will also watch TV in the morning, and this, no matter it is coal-fired power or hydroelectric power, is a waste of resources. Although these effects are small, if every Chinese does it every day, it will be a huge influence. Therefore, we should save the national resources as much as possible .

Answer 4

最后一句，although和but不能在同一个句子中出现，这是语法错误。

Answer 5

没错，就是这样，不用担心