Question

请帮我来看一下这段英语作文有没有什么错误，如果有请帮我指出并帮忙改一下，谢谢~

Answer 1

i want to go to japan, because the cherry blossoms are very beautiful. i very much want to see it.i want to go to Ueno to see the cherry blossoms, because i heard that Ueno have the most beautiful cherry blossoms. i want to go to Akihabara for shopping, as an anime fan, im going to Akihabara for sure. i also want to see Mount Fuji and go to the Kyushu spa. in conclusion, i hope that one day i can travel to japan.

you can replace travel to -> visit

Answer 2

i want to go to japan, because the cherry blossoms are very beautiful. i very much want to see it.i want to go to Ueno to see the cherry blossoms, because i heard that Ueno have the most beautiful cherry blossoms. i want to go to Akihabara for shopping, as an anime fan, im going to Akihabara for sure. i also want to see Mount Fuji and go to the Kyushu spa. in conclusion, i hope that one day i can travel to japan.

Answer 3

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I want to go to Japan, because Japan cherry blossom is very beautiful, I very much want to see. I want to go to Ueno to see cherry blossoms, because I heard Ueno's most beautiful cherry blossoms. I want to go to Akihabara shopping, as an Anime fan, Akihabara is sure to go. I also want to see Mount Fuji, to Kyushu spa. In conclusion, I hope one day I can travel to japan.

追答

I very much want to see后加 it