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May first is a Sunday. And it is the Labor’s Day. My mother said to me :“Open your eyes！And look out of the window. What a fine day! Let’s go to park,” So my mother, my classmate and I went to the park. We took some foods in my schoolbag. On the way to the park. I saw the blue sky with snow-white clouds. I saw pear trees and some apple trees and so on. Below the trees, there are several kinds of flowers. It’s colorful, blue, red, yellow, pink, purple, orange and white. I saw some balloons and butterflies in the sky. I ate popcorn, cornflakes, banana and lollipop. They were wonderful.
In the afternoon, we went to the zoo. I visited the birds, mice, cats, dogs, budgies, hamsters, rabbits and so on.
May Day is my favorite day！

May first is a Sunday. And it is the Labor’s Day. My mother said to me :“Open your eyes！And look out of the window. What a fine day! Let’s go to park,” So my mother, my classmate and I went to the park. We took some foods in my schoolbag. On the way to the park. I saw the blue sky with snow-white clouds. I saw pear trees and some apple trees and so on. Below the trees, there are several kinds of flowers. It’s colorful, blue, red, yellow, pink, purple, orange and white. I saw some balloons and butterflies in the sky. I ate popcorn, cornflakes, banana and lollipop. They were wonderful.
In the afternoon, we went to the zoo. I visited the birds, mice, cats, dogs, budgies, hamsters, rabbits and so on.
May Day is my favorite day！

Answer 1

五月一日是一个星期日。它是劳动节。我母亲对我说：“睁开你的眼睛，看看窗外。天气真不错啊！让我们去公园，所以我的母亲，我和我的同学去公园。我们带了食物在我的书包。在去公园的路上。我看见蓝色的天空与雪白的云彩。我看到了梨树和苹果树等。树的下面，有几种鲜花。它的色彩，蓝色，红色，黄色，粉红色，紫色，橙色和白色。我看到一些气球和蝴蝶在天空。我吃了爆米花，玉米片，香蕉和棒棒糖。他们是美妙的。

在下午，我们去动物园。我参观了鸟类，老鼠，猫，狗，鹦鹉，地鼠，兔等。

可能是我最喜欢的一天！

五月一日是一个星期日。它是劳动节。我母亲对我说：“睁开你的眼睛，看看窗外。天气真不错啊！让我们去公园，所以我的母亲，我和我的同学去公园。我们带了食物在我的书包。在去公园的路上。我看见蓝色的天空与雪白的云彩。我看到了梨树和苹果树等。树的下面，有几种鲜花。它的色彩，蓝色，红色，黄色，粉红色，紫色，橙色和白色。我看到一些气球和蝴蝶在天空。我吃了爆米花，玉米片，香蕉和棒棒糖。他们是美妙的。

在下午，我们去动物园。我参观了鸟类，老鼠，猫，狗，鹦鹉，地鼠，兔等。

可能是我最喜欢的一天！

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Answer 2

五月一日是星期天。是劳动节。妈妈对我说:“睁开你的眼睛!往窗外看。那是很美妙的一天!让我们去公园,“所以我的母亲,我的同学和我去公园了。我们把一些食物在我的书包里。在去公园的路上。我看见蓝天与雪白的云。我看见一些苹果树和梨树。树下面,有几种不同种类的花。这是丰富多彩的,蓝色,红色,黄色,粉色,紫色,橙色和白色。我看到一些气球和蝴蝶在空中。我吃爆米花、脆玉米片、香蕉和棒棒糖。他们都很棒。在下午,我们去了动物园。我参观了鸟类、老鼠、猫、狗、budgies、仓鼠、兔子等等。
　　五一节是我最喜欢的一天!

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