Question

一道SAT语法问题，大家请进~~

The ruling of the court requires a clarifying statement about (loan applicants and how you judge they are being treated unfairly). 括号为划线内容
正答为：standards for determining unfair treatment of loan applicants.
我选了：unfair treatment standards in regard to loan applicants.
我知道正确选项没有问题，可是我选的那个似乎更简洁更formal啊，请问它有什么语法问题呢？

Answer 1

1，standards for // determining unfair treatment of loan applicants.
判定贷款申请人不公平待遇的标准。

2，unfair treatment standards in regard to loan applicants.
关于贷款申请人不公平待遇的标准。
The ruling of the court requires a clarifying statement about ……
法院的这项裁决要求发表一份关于（如何）判定贷款申请人不公平待遇标准的声明。
关键就是“determining”
“判定……标准”没有了之后句意不完整。

Answer 2

in regard to 没有judge的意思

还有，语法中通常动词优先于名词

Answer 3

in regard to 其实就已经复杂了,它没有for 简洁啊,而且可能你的选项将原文中那个judge省没了,可能会改变意思,所以正确答案又全面又不罗嗦...很多这种问题要看小细节的