Question

英语大神快来！帮忙修改英语演讲稿！

My ideal lifestyle
My ideal lifestyle is simple and healthy.As a Chinese student,too much homework and exams make me stressed.And I hope that I will have more free time to do what I really want to do.Such as going shopping with friends,travelling with my relatives,and doing sports.I do sports so that I can study happily with a strong body.
Thank you!
以上是我自己写的。求各位大神指出语法错误之处并加以修改！！若能给予我一些更为高级的表达方式即最佳！

Answer 1

My ideal lifestyle
My ideal lifestyle is simple and healthy.As a Chinese student, (可以加 with)too much homework and exams make me stressed.And I hope that I will have more free time to do what I really want to do.Such as going shopping with friends,travelling with my relatives,and doing sports.I (do 可以改为: like doing) sports so that I can study happily with a strong (应该用 stronger) body.
Thank you!

因为演词甚短，所以其没有很多错处。其馀句子没有问题。

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追问

too much homework and exams 这里不会很奇怪吗？
much可以用来修饰exams吗？

追答

不奇怪，因为homework 是不可数名词，所以用 too much 来修饰是正确的。