Question

悬赏：跪求帮我修改一下英语作文段落,主要是修改语法，遣词造句，麻烦老师们了！

This increaseingly severe punishment is probably a necessary，but not a sufficient，condition for the clamping down on drunk drivers required by road accidents.Thus，
traffic security problems might not be able to escape the traps without cognition
changes that may be possible only with the improvement of ideological and moral
quality of people.A lack of moral quality，however doesn't constraint of economic
development，but the constraint of construction of spiritual civilization can be seen
for the foreseeable future！

Answer 1

这种效果可能是一个必要的严厉惩罚,但不是充分,条件加强取缔酒后开车accidents.Thus所需的道路,
交通安全问题可能无法摆脱陷阱没有认知
变化可能是只能通过提高思想道德
人们的素质。一个缺乏道德品质,然而没有约束的经济
开发,但约束精神文明建设可以看到
在可预见的未来!

Answer 2

The increaseingly severe punishment is probably a necessary，but it is not a sufficient，condition for the clamping down on drunk drivers required by road accidents.Thus，
traffic security problems might not be able to escape the traps without cognition
changes that may be possible only with the improvement of ideological and moral
quality of people.A lack of moral quality，however doesn't constraint of economic
development，but the constraint of construction of spiritual civilization can be seen
for the foreseeable future！

Answer 3

This increaseingly severe punishment is probably necessary，but not asufficient，on the condition for the clamping down on drunk drivers required by road accidents.Thus，
traffic security problems may not be able to escape the traps without cognition
changes that may be possible only with the improvement of ideological and moral
quality of people.A lack of moral quality，however, doesn't constraint on economic
development，but the constraint which on the construction of spiritual civilization can be seen
for the foreseeable future！

Answer 4

段中有大量中国式英语，需要大改

追问

请用心一点，有错帮忙指出好么？这是考研英语真题的框架，大部分句式应该不会象你说的是中国式英语