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（3小时内）帮写一篇英语六级预测作文（重谢）

不要抄袭，原创采纳。作文要求：Directions : For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled On Self-improvement by commenting on the saying , “There is nothing noble in being superior to your fellow man; true nobility is being superior to your former self. ” You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
请英语高手速度帮忙，视情况重谢

Answer 1

Green Olympics
Olympic Games, as we all know, is a historic sports meeting. “Green Olympics”, is one of the three themes of Beijing 2008 Olympic Games. At present, people’s life is being flooded with exhaust gas from automobile, blue film, waste water and so on. Owing to these phenomena, we should advocate “Green Olympics”, and I am positive of this point.
Two possible reasons are as follows. Firstly, environmental protection benefits people’s health. In terms of increasing number of trashes around us, such as white plastic bags, one-off cups and chopsticks, it is sensible of disposing of them reasonably. So we ought to use clean technology, renewable and recyclable materials. Secondly, environmental protection is crucial to our country, and even to the world. Lots of countries attached more attention to embrace the Olympic spirits---“higher, faster, and stronger” well.
In conclusion, as college students and the young generation, we should try our best to advocate “Green Olympics”. The 2008 Olympic Games will be a green and unique Olympics.

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别来凑数。

Answer 2

“There is nothing noble in being superior to your fellow man; true nobility is being superior to your former self. ” This passage comes from Ernest Hemingway's True Nobility（斜体字）.
As we know, Ernest Hemingway's article is as fabulous as fabulous can be.His passage always reveals a arguments.This passage is no exception.I have a thought that it implicit an arguments.The most significant thing in the world, is the one who knows how to master their own.The real nobility of a man lies in what he is.
Everything truly solid and sweet is noble quality and honesty is the germ from which all growth of nobleness proceeds.
By and large go beyond yourself, Who will surpass his own species next?
自己写的好累啊。

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貌似偏题了=。=

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“There is nothing noble in being superior to your fellow man; true nobility is being superior to your former self. ” This passage comes from Ernest Hemingway's True Nobility（斜体字）.

As we know, Ernest Hemingway's article is as fabulous as fabulous can be.His passage always reveals a arguments.This passage is no exception.I have a thought that it implicit an arguments.The most significant thing in the world, is the one who knows how to master their own.

However, Behind, some people outside, don't
always thinking of others, make themselves beyond, and mental nothing, with his
opponent, yesterday for himself.

No beyond their disability of pride, which have
hawking's a, No beyond their physical vision, which has the 110m hurdles champion liu xiang, No beyond
their courage, and behold behind China shocked the world
"developed"... .

Anyhow, transcend themselves, success is on foot

By and large go beyond yourself, Who will surpass his own species next?
修改过的，验收吧

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主旨是提升自己胜过超越他人，围绕那句话进行议论性质的的吧（如果改动合适我会加50分）

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字数被限制没办法了，就这样吧

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如果没有更好的我会在8点前采纳。。合作愉快