Question

求大神们帮我看看我这篇英语作文有没有语法错误。 The story mainly

求大神们帮我看看我这篇英语作文有没有语法错误。
The story mainly says that a man who found a bag with a bunch of clay balls threw it into the ocean . It was not until he had thrown a great deal clay balls that he found the value of it.
From the story , we learn that we ofen lose the most valuable things that we possess because of our carelessness. I have ever gone through the same affair as it.
So precious is time that we can't affort to waste it. I quite regretted the behaviour that I have wasted time in my jonior high school. I used to be abstracted in class , chatting with my deskmate and ignoring the content that teacher said . Therefore , I missed many valuable chances to study . If time had gone back , I wound have treasured it .
Nowadays , I feel difficult for some aspects of study . For example English grammar , only a little can I grasp . There is no doubt that it is vital to have a firm basis . In order to learn English well , I try my best to concentrate on English lesson . I don't waste my time any more and I have faith in my future . The past have gone , the best still waits for me in the future.

Answer 1

mainly用得不当。mainly是指“大部分的”。可以说story goes that
a bunch of balls？一大把球儿？
threw易为thrown，後不要it。
the ocean？哪个ocean？前文没提到不要用the。
後面这句没看懂。

第二段的主谓关系排得不好。应该把“学到”放在头里: What we would learn from this story is ....此外那个affair用得不当。

第三段，首先拼错了：afford，其次，afford不需要“can、can't”，因为它本身就是“X得起”的意思，所以直接用助动词就行了。不需要情态动词。

behavior有行为举止的意思，此处不适用。

used to这个词有“当时如此，然後现在不是了”的意思，不适用。
content此处不适用，ignore our teacher即可。
therefore这个“因此”，是“因为条件，所以必然”的意思。日语即従って
to study→of studying
if time went back, I would cherish it much more.
Nowadays这个词太大，常译作：当下，限时。你不过是小时候没好好听课而已，用不上这麼大的词。

For example的内容可以放进“我发现好多难题”这句中去。
……总之吧，你这里用词和语法错误可谓错漏百出，建议重写。

追问

什么东西嘛，不懂，就不要在这里瞎说，首先你说的这些错误，我都是根据高考作文模板的格式写的，其次，我的英语老师已经帮我改正过来了，并没有你所说的错误，而且老师好表扬我，说我写的比范文还好呢。

追答

那你们老师的水平也值得商榷了。难道阁下以为教课的就正确吗？本人遇见不靠谱的讲师多得是。若有机会，还请尊师当面理论。区区奉陪。

追问

反正你不靠谱，这一点我是非常肯定的了，一看你回答得乱七八糟的，毫无逻辑性，还夹杂着日文，一点都不专业，阁下你到底清不清楚现在的高考英语发展的形势呀，你又不是这领域的，你凭什么说我敬爱的老师不靠谱！

追答

区区不敢托大，海外呆过几年，雅思咱也考过，成绩尚可。至於尊师麼，敬是一回事，信又是一回事。慢慢阁下会明白的，这天下没人是绝对正确，一定可信的。对即是对，错，即是错。

Answer 2

你去上作业帮

追问

你在逗我吗？你不是知道错的地方么？怎么会不懂怎么改正呢？

追答

fell difficult
哪有这样的用法？

追问

那应该怎样改正过来呢？大神拜托了，我下午要交作业了，时间不多了，麻烦你哦。

追答

l hard for

我对于做某事困难

追问

那用have difficulty in 可以么？

追答

也可以。你几年级？如果你是初中那当然可以用，

追问

我高二了，唉，错就错吧，反正老师会帮我改正会来的，那谢你啦。

追答

0谢我就采纳我呀。

追问

亲，谢你是一回事，实际上你并没有帮我解决到问题，这不符合常规，所以只能对不起了。

追答

但是你问，不也白问了吗

追问

不要在意这些小细节啦，我要去赶作业了，不说了，拜拜。

通过你和另一位回答者的鲜明对比，我突然觉得你好专业，好认真对待我提出的问题呀。于是我决定采纳你的回答啦。⊙▽⊙

Answer 3

It was not until he had thrown a great number clay balls
we can't afford to waste it.
quite regret the behaviour that I have wasted time in my jonior hig