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假如你们英语课上将对“饮食习惯”这一话题进行讨论。请你根据下列提示，用英语写一篇发言稿叙述一下你们

假如你们英语课上将对“饮食习惯”这一话题进行讨论。请你根据下列提示，用英语写一篇发言稿叙述一下你们班同学的饮食习惯和你自己对该问题的看法。内容要点如下： 部分同学的不良饮食习惯 良好的饮食习惯 个人看法 Go to school without breakfastHave snacksEat or drink too much Have a balanced dietA proper amount of foodEat regularly Your opinions… 注意：1.发言稿必须包含所有内容要点，可适当发挥； 2.发言稿开头已经给出，不计入总词数； 3. 词数：80-100词。请写到答题纸指定位置。Dear friends, As we all know, it’s important for us to form healthy eating habits. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

Dear friends, As we all know, it’s important for us to form healthy eating habits. Some of us have bad habits ,such as going  to school without breakfast,having snacks and eating or drinking too much. We should develop good eating habits, for example, having a balanced diet, eating a proper amount of food and eating regularly. Bad habits can make our body unhealthy and we may get some kind of disease. On the contrary,good habits can make us healthier and happier. In my opinon, we should eat more fruit and vegetalbes,eat many food which contains protain,less food which contain fat.

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文分别例举什么是好习惯什么是坏习惯，然后提出自己的观点，全文主要用一般现在时态。 【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如 Some of us，such as，go to chool ,for example,a proper amount of,some kind of ,on the contrary,in my opinon等短语；定语从句如food which contains protain， food which contain fat，文章层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。