第II卷(非选择题,共35分)第一节:短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)请你修改以下作文,文中共

第II卷(非选择题,共35分)第一节:短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)请你修改以下作文,文中共有10处语言错误,每句最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加,删除... 第II卷(非选择题,共35分)第一节:短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)请你修改以下作文,文中共有10处语言错误,每句最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第十一处起)不计分Dear sir or madam, I have learned from an advertisement what your company is in need for a secrelary.I’d like you consider me for the position. My name is Li min.I am twenty three years old.I’m studied business management in Xiamen University.I graduate this summer.I am familiar to computer operation and office software,which can help me do the office work very well.But I have learned English for ten years.In the past two years, I have been an editor for the English Paper of my department.My grades come out top in my department.What’s the more,I like office work very much and I too think that I can be competent for thr job.If I could have the opportunity to get the job I will be quite appreciative. Thank you for your consideration.I look forward to hear from you. Yours faithfully,Limin 展开
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