Question

英语句子改错

1.It took Jack two hours climb the mountain.( )
2.The tomatoes I picked are much more redder than yours.( )
3.they didin't had the chance to be there two montbs ago.( )
4.Although he is old.but my grandpa works on the farm.( )
5.You are terrible ill. You'd better stay in bed.( )
6.The nearest village is about one hundred miles far away( )
7.I don't like going out lonely after dark.( )
8.I'm looking forward to get her letter.( )
9.Birds flew back because the fine environment.( )
10.The students entered into the classroom one by one.( )

Answer 1

climb 前加to
more去掉
had该为have
Although和but去掉其一
terrible 改为terriblly
far去掉
lonely改为alone
get 改为getting
because后加of
into去掉
保证正确

Answer 2

1.hours 后加to
2.redder 改为red 或将more去掉~
3.had改为have
4.although 和but中任选一个去掉，二者不可同时使用在一个句子里面~
5.terrib改为terribly
6.将句子末尾的far去掉
7.将after改为in
8.将get改为getting
9.because后边加of
10.去掉into

Answer 3

1.It took Jack two hours to climb the mountain.
2.The tomatoes I picked are much redder than yours.
3.They didin't have the chance to go there two montbs ago.
4.Although he is old, my grandpa works on the farm.
5.You are terribly ill. You'd better be in bed.
6.The nearest village is about one hundred miles far from here.
7.I don't like going out alone after dark.
8.I'm looking forward to receiving her letter.
9.Birds flew back because of the fine environment.
10.The students entered the classroom one by one.
我改的不一定,还请高手进一步改正.....

Answer 4

1.
问题较多！主要体现在两点：
1）和原文句意不符。原文把作业负担过重和睡眠不足、缺乏锻炼并列为问题原因，而楼主写成了“作业负担过重导致了睡眠不足和缺乏锻炼”。
2）This
phenomenon前面是句号，说明前面是一个完整的句子，但是你写成了一个介词短语（做原因状语）加一个非限制性定语从句的结构，主句连主语和谓语都没有。
其他还有点语法和搭配等小问题。建议改成：
Nowadays
many
students
suffer
from
health
problems
such
as
obesity
and
short-sightedness,
which
mostly
result
from
too
much
homework,
lack
of
enough
sleep
and
proper
exercise.
This
phenomenon
has
raised
increasing
concern
in
society.
如果用楼主的结构，则pay
attention
to中的to，在被动句中也不能省略。
2.
改写成：For
the
sake
of
lessening
the
students'
pressure,
...
楼主要注意：这也是一个介宾短语（做目的状语），不是单个句子。
是students'，不是student's。
3.
主句问题不大，if从句中的is
turned
into
reality不妥帖。
turn
into
reality意思是“变成现实；实现”，和句意有所差别。
建议改成：If
the
advice
above
is
put
into
practice,
...
put...into
practice是一个固定短语，意思是“把...付诸实践；加以实施”。

Answer 5

It took Jack two hours to climb the mountain.
The tomatoes I picked are redder than yours.
they didin't had chance to be there two montbs ago.
Although he is old.my grandpa works on the farm
You are terribly ill. You'd better stay in bed
The nearest village is about one hundred miles away
I don't like going out lonely in dark
I'm looking forward to getting her letter
Birds flew back because of the fine environment
The students entered the classroom one by one