Question

求助英语改错

Dear Mr. Jackson,
I'm Li Hua, a student of Xinhua Middle School. I am writing this letter to thank you returning my losing wallet.
I am glad when I was informed I would get my wallet back. I learned that it was you picked up my wallet and kindly handed it out so quickly. I lost my wallet on my way home from school. What careless I was! With your kind help and honesty, I would still be deep in a sorrow and anxiety. You know, documents such as my ID card and student card is very important to me.
May I invite you for a weekend dinner in return? I am looking forward to receive your reply.

Answer 1

凡是有改动的地方，我用括号括起来了，楼主请查看。
Dear Mr. Jackson,
I'm Li Hua, a student of Xinhua Middle School. I am writing this letter to thank you (for )returning my (lost) wallet.
I am glad when I was informed I would get my wallet back. I learned that it was you (who )picked up my wallet and kindly handed it (over) so quickly. I lost my wallet on my way home from school. (How )careless I was! ( Without) your kind help and honesty, I would still be deep (in sorrow and anxiety). You know, documents such as my ID card and student card (are )very important to me.
May I invite you (to) a weekend dinner in return? I am looking forward to (receiving) your reply.

Answer 2

thank you (for) returning 括号里是需要加的词
What careless i was! what 改为how
With your kind help and honesty,删掉 honesty
May I invite you for a weekend dinner in return: 顺序调整为dinner in this weekend. for 改为to
I would still be deep in a sorrow and anxiety 这句改为 i would still in a hard situation

I am looking forward to receive: receive 改为receiving. 注意look forward to 后面接动词的ing形式

我尽量列出并说明改动的原因，而不是简单的告诉你一个答案。希望能帮到你。

Answer 3

Dear Mr. Jackson,
I'm Li Hua, a student of Xinhua Middle School. I am writing this letter to thank you(your) returning my losing(lost) wallet.
I am(was) glad when I was informed I would get my wallet back. I learned that it was you(加who) picked up my wallet and kindly handed it out(in) so quickly. I lost my wallet on my way home from school. What(How) careless I was! With(Without) your kind help and honesty, I would still be deep in a(去掉a) sorrow and anxiety. You know, documents such as my ID card and student card is(are) very important to me.
May I invite you for(to) a weekend dinner in return? I am looking forward to receive(receiving) your reply