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急急急，跪求英语作文，最好要自己写的，不要用汉语译过来的啊！！

假设你是李华，你的朋友Jenny向你询问如何保持健康。请你给她发一封邮件提些建议。内容要点如下：
1. 注意合理饮食。多吃鱼、肉、豆类等，特别是新鲜蔬菜和水果，不要吃太多甜食。
2. 注意锻炼身体。劳逸结合，多参加体育活动。
3. 保证充足的睡眠。不要熬夜，每天至少睡8个小时。
注意：1. 词数；100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 邮件的开头已为你写好

Dear Jenny，
How nice to hear form you ! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy...

审题谋篇
1. 时态: 一般现在时
2. 人称: 第二人称
3. 结构:首先说明写这封邮件的目的，然后就如何保持健康提出建议，最后一句话总结。

Answer 1

Dear Jenny，
How nice to hear form you ! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy...
on my opinion , we must keept three life style so as we to stay on health
first of all, we must take care of our eating habit . fish meat beans and so on is
good for our health ,especilly fresh vegetables and fruits did ,but much sweet is bad for it;
then we must keep tainning on our body, study with a rest and take some more gymnastics
is also contribute much to our body。
At last we must have a good sleep eveyday，do not stay all night and keep a sleep time at least 8 hours one night ！
that‘s the way i keept healthy ，have you a try ？ may you have a good health ！
best wishes to you
your‘s friend Li Hua
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Answer 2

这种说明是汉字的英文作文难道能避免汉字影响的英文错误吗？