Question

急！专业英语翻译，今晚确认分数，悬赏100分！

Dear all sales,

感谢大家前三季度的努力付出，通过数据的收集，整理出了每一位销售的业绩情况，如下图所示，

通过图形我们可以了解到

1，今年到9月份为止自己总共的OG revenue 和 QP revenue

2，今年到9月份为止的业绩是否达到公司设定Gate或target

3, 通过OG 和QP 相差的数值清楚的了解自己还剩多少revenue 可以在后三个月进行release，为制订制定计划提供依据

4 通过前三季度的业绩.，预测了每一位销售整年的业绩，可以了解到按目前的业绩持续下去是否能达到整年Gate或target. 如不能达到，需要各位努力做单，付出比前三季度更大的努力

以上数据请大家认真仔细研读，给自己正确的定位，同时制定好销售计划，以便于自己更容易完成公司设定的年度目标，期待大家的努力！
拜托各位别用什么机器翻译了。。。机器翻译我就不上这里了， 我要专业一点的，商务一点的。可否？

Answer 1

你是不是要演讲或者邮件啊？那我尽量提供口语化的简单的表达哈
翻译如下：
Dear all sales,

感谢大家前三季度的努力付出，通过数据的收集，整理出了每一位销售的业绩情况，如下图所示，
Thank you, everyone! Thank you for your effort in the last three quarters! We collected the datas and worked out the performance of each sale (as shown below). (如下图所示建议省略并到下一句，不然感觉重复了)

通过图形我们可以了解到
Please look at these graphs:

1，今年到9月份为止自己总共的OG revenue 和 QP revenue
It shows us the total OG revenue and QP revenue until this September.

2，今年到9月份为止的业绩是否达到公司设定Gate或target
It also tells us whether our achievement hit the company's target unthil this September.

3, 通过OG 和QP 相差的数值清楚的了解自己还剩多少revenue 可以在后三个月进行release，为制订制定计划提供依据
Through the difference between OG and QP, we clearly know the rest revenue can be released in the following three monthes. This provide us the basis for the next plan.

4 通过前三季度的业绩.，预测了每一位销售整年的业绩，可以了解到按目前的业绩持续下去是否能达到整年Gate或target. 如不能达到，需要各位努力做单，付出比前三季度更大的努力
Basing on these performance, we can also predict the year performance of each of you. (或者Through the numbers in the last three quarters, we can also predict everyone's performance for the whole year. ) Therefore, it is easy to know whether we can fulfill the task at the present speed by the end of this year. If not, we require more effort from each one of you.

以上数据请大家认真仔细研读，给自己正确的定位，同时制定好销售计划，以便于自己更容易完成公司设定的年度目标，期待大家的努力！
Please read these datas carefully and reposition yourselves. Please improve your sales plan so as to reach the target given by the company this year. Looking forward your performance!

Answer 2

Dear all sales,

Thank you all of the previous three quarters of efforts to pay, through the data collection, sorting out each sales performance situation, as the chart shows,

Through the graphic we can learn

1, this year to 9 total so far in his OG revenue and QP revenue

2 this year, so far in September to the performance of the company is set to Gate or target

3, through the OG QP numerical clear difference and the know how much revenue with the second three months can release, for making the plan provides the basis

Before the performance in the third quarter 4 through., forecast the each year sales performance, can understand the current performance continue to Gate or whether all year round target. If you can not reach, need you try to do list, pay more than in the previous three quarters of the effort

Above data please all seriously study, and to give yourself the correct position, and make good sales plan, so that more easy to complete the company set annual targets, looking forward to effort!

Answer 3

Dear all sales,

Thank you for the first three quarters of the effort, through data collection, sorting out every sales situation, as shown below,Through the graph we can seeIn 1, the year until September oneself a total of OG revenue and QP revenueIn 2, the year until September performance meets the company set Gate or target3, through the OG and QP difference numerical clearly know how much revenue can be in after three months for release, to develop a plan to provide a basis4 through the first three quarter results, prediction. Every sales year performance, can see at the present performance last year can reach Gate or target. If cannot achieve, you need to do, to pay more than the first three quarters of greater effortsThe above data please carefully read, to their correct position, at the same time, make sales plan, in order to facilitate its easier to complete the company set annual targets, everyone looks forward to!

Answer 4

太累，不想翻