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你是学雅思的吗?能帮个忙吗?

帮我改篇雅思作文看能得几分it is right to limit on the use of private cars.what is your opnion ?With the steady growth in the country 'economy as well as the people 'living standard.There were more and more families have bought private cars.They even ragard the car as an indispensable part of their life .Howeverthe ,other people think that it is unnecessay for limit use of private cras.It is quite understandable that people from different backgrounds put different interpretations on the same Those who favor that it is not right to limit on the use of private cars give their reasons as follows .First of all , if can buring that comvenience of traffic for people crowded bus and went to work to late with the trouble.Secondly,nowadays people can enjoy the weekends and holidays beter with a car , they can go to places where the regard beses and train go not go , and so they can find a quiet scenic spot with no crowds.Finally , if it is limited to use of private cars ,more and more serious problems such as unemployment and loss of country 's economy will arise.However,the other side of the coin voices its strong oppostition saying that it is right to limit on the use of private cars .In the first place ,many cities have the problem of traffic jams with a sharp rise in the number of private cars .It coused serious seciety problem to maintain and no order of the seciety.Many people will disregard traffic regulations owing to the problem of traffic jams .Moreover , as a larger number of vehicles with use gasoline to launched that it lend to environmental pollution and the environment protector have to research how to solve it .There is probably a little bit of truth in both arguments . For my part ,i completely agree with the later view that it is right to limit on the use of private cars . It coused serious problem of seciety that disregard traffic regulations with traffic jams . Therefore, I am sure it is limited on the use of private cars maybe many people will agree.

Answer 1

有些单词拼写错误，语法和词汇比较初级哦，大概5.5分的水平，加油哈

Answer 2

5.5