Question

我写了篇英语作文大家帮我看一下有没有语法错误或要修改的（我小学六年级）

Hello, everyone,this is Ying Jie. I’m going to have a Happy weekend!On Saturday,I’m going to the supermarket on foot .I’m going to buy some bread and some Juice. Then, I’m going to go home and eat a big meal. On Sunday,I’m going to the Playground Play basketball . Then,in the afternoon ,I’m going to the home do homework .in the evening i'm going to watch TV .That will be fun!

Answer 1

Hello everyone, I am Ying Jie. I’m going to have a happy weekend! On the coming Saturday, I shall go to the supermarket on foot. I’m going to buy some bread and some juice. Then, I will go home and have a big meal in the evening. On Sunday, I will go to the playground to play basketball . In the afternoon, I will do my homework . In the evening I will watch TV. That will be fun!
(未来式不一定用 I'm going to....)

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谢谢
我们这个单元教i'm going to……
请问这篇作文有没有原则上的错误？

怎么不说话了……

追答

每句都是Im going to...是作句, 不是作文.
原則上沒有大錯. 只是在句中不用把一些字加大階.

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谢谢
那可是如果每句都是I will算不算作句
如果有一句和别的不一样可不可以啊

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I'm going to.., I shall...., I will..... 都可.

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要多少悬赏

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不用. 你採納我的答案是最佳答案就好了.

Answer 2

是不是在打电话，如果不是this is Ying Jie最好改成i'm Ying Jie
I’m going to the Playground Play basketball 应该是I’m going to the Playground and Play basketball （或者 I’m going to the Playground to Play basketball ）
I’m going to the home do homework 应该是I’m going to my home to do homework （或者I’m going to my home and do homework ）