Question

急！急！急！！！跪求一篇英语作文！选用以下部分词组写一篇70~80个单词的文，有汉语注释，最好在今晚给我

词组如下：“because of、come up、at present、make(full/good)use of, command, request, play a part in, (be)recognize...as, even if, a/the number of, no such, believe it or not. "
给我好文的我会再加20分
天哪 有人能帮我这个英语白痴一下吗T-T

Answer 1

Learning English requests much effort. Besides this， We should make good use of what we have. For example, teachers know more English than you, so whenever you have any problems in learning English, you could ask your teachers for help or suggestions. Recognize English as your friend instead of enemy, because you will learn it better when you get interest in it and feel it friendly. Believe or not, there is no such thing that you can get it without effort.
学习英语要求付出很大的努力，除此之外，我们要好好利用我们现有的资源。 比如说，老师了解英语肯定比我们多，所以任何时候如果你在学习英语上遇到了问题，都可以像老师求救或让她们给你一些建议。 要把英语当做是你的朋友而非敌人，因为当你对它感兴趣并觉得它很友善的时候你才能更好的学习英语。信或不信，世界上没有什么是不劳而获的！

自己写的哈 有什么问题直说~~

追问

We should make good use of what we have 这句感觉怪怪的， 还有这个Believe or not, there is no such thing that you can get it without effort ，是不是写错了？

追答

没有错的。。。。你是几年级的？初中还是高中？。。。可能语法还没深入到那。。。学了定语从句跟宾语从句了没？前一句是宾语从句（介宾结构），后面那句是定语从句；
如果没有的话就把两个句子改成下面的简单句就好了~

we should make good use of teacher resource (我们应该好好利用教师资源)
you can't get anything without effort 没有付出努力你不可能获得任何东西

追问

哦 我是高一的，英语特烂 嘿嘿~谢谢你啊

Answer 2

诚实一点

追问

什么啊 什么诚实一点啊 什么意思啊你！

Answer 3

你要求写什么类型的啊

追问

随便什么都行 只要选用以上词组三到四个就可以

追答

How to Make the Best Use of spare time
　　It is beyond doubt that we enjoy more free time after school. But as to how to make use of our spare time, different students hold sharply different views.
　　In order to earn money, a number of students are busy doing part-time jobs. In this way, they can relieve their families’financial burden to some extent. Besides, they can achieve more independence through their work. Others are confronted by countless exams and they often attend guidance lectures in the hope of improving their performance in these tests. They believe that a record of good exam results will be useful when they look for jobs in the future.
　　As far as I am concerned, I will live my spare time in a different way. On the one hand, as a student, I will give priority to the development of my knowledge and skills, so I am determined to spend most of my spare time studying hard. On the other hand, I think it is necessary for me to play a part in one or more of the student associations. These associations can provide chances to improve my communicating skills and make my life colorful. In conclusion, whether you believe it or not, I do believe that my life will turn out to be colorful as well as fruitful.

追问

先谢谢你啊 有劳 不过太长了 看不懂的说。。。。。。