Question

在线等！！急！！望高手帮忙！！请帮我看看下面这篇演讲稿哪有错误！！谢谢~~

my dear teachers the students good afternoon。I am really pleased and honored to be here. frist i want to thangs to my English teacher gave me such a chance
I and everybody has been together for nearly two months, everybody knows my Chinese name, but everybody certainly did not know that my English name, now lets me tell everybody me English name ,my english name is crystal .As you can see I am a girl，a lively, cheerful girl.I am 17 years old .though not outstanding, but looks I appreciate myself!
My academic performance in general.My favorite subject is math, although some student think math is hard to learn it well. But I like math, I have always believed that if you try your best, nothing is too high to be reached.if you have trouble,don't hesitate to turn to me for help,i will be there for you.But my physics is not good, hope that the students will help me a lot。 I also like sports. For example running, volleyball, and so on.
My disposition is a little stubborn, in some things, I will stick to their own opinions, but I think: only believe in yourself, others will believe in you。I hope you can forgive me.
like red and black. I like to eat watermelon, because it is very delicious. OH and my idol is a member of the SUJU Kim Hee Chul.My hobby is listening to music and drawing .in my spare time,i often listen to music and drawing because they can relax me and help me escape from heavy pressure.
That's all.Thank you

Answer 1

good afternoon dear teachers the students 。I am really pleased and honored to be here. frist i want to say thanks to my English teacher for giving me such a chance
We have been together for nearly two months, everybody knows my Chinese name, but hardly any body know that my English name is, now let me tell everybody my English name ,my english name is crystal .As you can see I am a girl，a lovely, cheerful girl.I am 17 years old .though not outstanding, but I appreciate myself!
My favorite subject is math, although some students think math is hard to learn. But I like it, I always believed that if you try your best, nothing is too high to be reached.if you have trouble,don't hesitate to turn to me for help,i will be there for you.But my physics is not good, I hope that you will help me。 I also like sports, such as running, volleyball, and so on.
My disposition is a little stubborn, in some things, I insist in my opinion, I think: only believe in yourself, others will believe in you。I hope you can forgive me.
like red and black. I like eating watermelon, because it is very delicious. OH and my idol is a member of the SUJU Kim Hee Chul.My hobby is listening to music and drawing .in my spare time,i often listen to music and drawing pictures because it can relax me and help me escape from heavy pressure.
That's all.Thank you
大概修改了一下。

Answer 2

不是 i and everebody 倒过来 这是英语的一种特殊说法
my disposition is a little stubborn in some things ,i will stick to their own opinions 我认为也应该吧stubborn 改成 persistent
idont know if i am right